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SEA
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0 posted 2000-12-18 07:03 PM



I made a

List
Of all the reasons I care for you
Vowing
Each day to show

You
Of the love in my heart for our
Unique and special bond


~SEA~

* I wrote this a long time ago for a special friend of mine......just wanted to share  

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Poeminister
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1 posted 2000-12-18 07:05 PM


SEA-Lovely acrostic.

Poeminister

jwesley
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2 posted 2000-12-18 07:07 PM


I agree...quite lovely (and whatever that other word is....).

jwesley

Marsha
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3 posted 2000-12-18 07:07 PM


Circe, did I not say you were talented and astounding. This is truly beautiful, it really is, simply beautiful. I love it as you KNEW I would. Magic,  
Take care
                Mushy
                    


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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Deep in the heart
4 posted 2000-12-18 07:09 PM


Thanks for sharing.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


kindasorta
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5 posted 2000-12-18 07:23 PM


after reading this share...I made a list myself, for different reasons..good one.
maxtec1
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6 posted 2000-12-18 08:16 PM


very sweet dear Lady friend.
Love and light,
Richard

Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2000-12-18 08:17 PM


Sensationally Effective Acrostic~

Visually Emitting Rarity Yielding

Niceties In Caring Emotions

~*Making Acrostics Reaps Growing Experience*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London
8 posted 2000-12-18 09:21 PM


To reminisce the days when we sat and wrote beautiful thoughts such as these ... helps to make each and every new day a special day

very nice

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9 posted 2000-12-18 09:25 PM


I think you are very kind
Lots of class and clever mind
Often I reflect upon
Various kindnesses you've done
Even though I've never seen
You anywhere but on this screen
Of your goodness there's no doubt
Up with happiness your shout
Rarely have I ever known
Better spirit than you've shown
Of all the poets passing by
Dear, you alone have caught my eye..
Yell to your husband I said HI!


Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
10 posted 2000-12-18 09:31 PM


Evening SEA,

The one word that I have in my mind at the present time is "Lovely".

BC

SEA
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11 posted 2000-12-18 11:02 PM


PM~   thank you

JWesley~   thanks

Marsha~ always so kind to me  

Interloper~ You're welcome  

kindasorta~ hi, thanks  

Richard~    thank you

Marge~ Thank you for the smiles with this very clever reply!  

Rex~ ya, just remembering.....thank you  

Balladeer~   you are too cute!!

BC~ that's pretty nice, thank you  

Wilfred Yeats
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12 posted 2000-12-19 01:15 AM


Acrostics are

Poems carrying
On their words
Everything
Marrying

Two messages
Of love

Conveying
A
Real
Response to
You

Letting
Our
Very
Emphatic

Tribute
Of appreciation for

Your lovely poems
Of love to
Us

SEA
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13 posted 2000-12-19 01:17 AM


Hey WY~   You're the best!!   -SEA
John R
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14 posted 2000-12-19 02:54 AM


Your writings, always so short and very complete in there message.  You have  a lot of love in your heart.

If a dream touches us, it exists to us as anything else that touches us.
John


Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
15 posted 2000-12-19 02:58 AM


And I still have that original one that you sent me so many years ago.  Yeah, don't I wish........if you had given me this I would be tied to your side still.  

Wonderful acrostic my friend and you find a way to say the most in so few words so often that I am truely impressed.  

A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses.
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Cassandra
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Charlotte, North Carolina, USA
16 posted 2000-12-19 03:01 AM


Marsha hit the nail on the head. You are very talented! Thank you for sharing this astoundingly beautiful write.


--Cassandra

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