Open Poetry #11 |
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It's Raining Buckets --- for fun! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
It’s Raining Buckets Virginia Salter It's raining buckets literally I really have to say well, bucket, is more accurate if truth I would convey There in the gutter by the road a two-gallon white does lie swallowing to its middle ground H two O in tie Floating leaves and sunk debris colorfies its charm running here flowing there causing some alarm Will those conveyances that go racing by splash these goods upon my walk and render mud in eye? Wetter, wetter do I grow as rain comes in on wind when will the cats and dogs show up? And when will I grow fins? © November 8, 2000 |
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compassion Member
since 2000-11-01
Posts 135USA |
LOL! Grinning here! Sounds like your stationary right outside my house....I can relate and certainly know bout them cats and dogs.. ![]() |
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Mattster Junior Member
since 2000-11-17
Posts 29 |
Hehe, clever poem, VAS! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Thanks, you two! I didn't have a lot of fun getting inspired to write this, but I had a great deal of fun writing it. You two have helped me relive that fun and add to it as well! Thanky! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very good, Virginia!! I enjoyed this very much! Denise |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Thanks alot, Denise. It was lots of fun for me, too. Glad you liked! Thanks for reading. |
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