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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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I Await Missing are the eyes That in the early hours Hold me entranced. Missing are the words, That fill me with your softness, The warmth within you. Missing are the moments, Those spent in togetherness, In each other's arms. I await the sound The shadow of tease, you voice, To lighten my dark. I await the morn, Anticipating those words, 'Til next we meet. I await... patient, Knowing that each tomorrow Will be mine some day. ~Wynter Waits "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 11-16-2000).] |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Great poem!  I liked this verse a lot. "I await the sound The shadow of tease, you voice, To lighten my dark" |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
wow. i really liked this. |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
I love the hope and promise in this Pepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
insect, yes I like that verse too, a voice can do so much with so little speaking, sometimes I wish these poems could actually talk then we would really share in the feelings behind them. Thank you ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Nakd... how fast the pages flip back but I'm pleased I got this chance to read this splenid poem you've shared... Thank you Coco |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
it shall be soon my friend. . . wonderful. . . ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
my eyes lit up when i read upon "the shadow of tease" too... lovely way of putting it...  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Missing are the eyes That in the early hours Hold me entranced. Missing are the words, That fill me with your softness, The warmth within you. ================ I await the sound The shadow of tease, you voice, To lighten my dark. ============= this is lovely ..so full of soft spoken longing and the shadow of tease phrase is very cool. wonderful expressive poetry take care jm "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" Lao Tze Tao ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Snow- glad you liked pepper-hope and promise...if onlys I guess, thank you Coco your words are alwasy appreciated thank you so much ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sven- thank you, I wish "soon" was already here kaile- yes I know that "tease", it always shadows me somehow thank youJanet Marie- once again I thank you for the visit and kind words~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Lovely poem! Very nice! Denise |
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