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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Worse than a slap - the turn of back The building of that six foot fence— to feel the pierce of misplaced trust and topple wall of silence. Surely you must know it all. I see this knowing; see contempt… With just a curl Of up-turned lip— volumes spoke in silence. And every word Remains unsaid? Haunts me— unforgiven dead— a-wander searching recompense a scream to shatter silence… |
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John R Member
since 2000-12-14
Posts 141Toledo OH |
Sometimes silence is worse than anything else, It leads the mind to wonder and think the worst. Enjoyed reading this serenity If a dream touches us, it exists to us as anything else that touches us. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
*sigh*(tired) you know that I know ... more mirrors baby ... (at least when its quiet we can read poetry) sarcasim always makes me feel better  hugs me twin me  Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Serenity--This poem is painful and real and loud! |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
They say silence is golden, I say silence gives the mind time to turn everything upside down, inside out and every which way but the right way, communication is the key to understanding, Great poem Serenity |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Serenity, this is spectacular and it brings out many emotions in the(this) reader if ya know what I mean  sweetieThank you so for sharing this exceptional write... Silence is quite powerful... Coco |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Silence? Oh yes. A very painful thing to contend with...but I do have to shamefully admit, that THIS TIME? I tried to write myself through HIS eyes. So...I thank you much, and I'm working on it, good poet people...I may still end up with nothing to say? But at least? I will say that much. Smiles, love, and gratitude. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Silence.....I do know that so well...the pain within ...silence with volume ((warm hugs)) Charisma |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Excellent!A perfect description of the silence. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
the sound of what? if only we could hear it. . . excellent. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
 (... And that says it all.Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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