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For the Moment |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware 
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For the Moment Come to me now This moment is ours We'll make it one Moments turn into hours A time just for holding Until morning light Hours for dancing In my arms through the night The darkness will cover Each warming each Wrapped in our love Real love we can teach Sunrise will wake us We'll kiss freely and joyful The wetness we're sharing Schemes met in a mouthful Then bonded together Like Siamese twins We'll make the earth quake As the world spins Our moment starts now With each word and each sigh In a loving dimension Real time passes by Music celestial Falls on our ears Past Saturn and Pluto We’ll discover new spheres Caresses eternal Galaxies flying by us Emotions hit zenith No one dares call it lust True passion pervades us Born of intimate knowing Our hearts are on fire But with true love glowing So time has no meaning When with you it’s measured Every infinite instant Is totally treasured |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
WY~ you touch my heart so gently with your gorgeous words.........I love this  Beautiful!! -SEA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Wilfred, A warm and well written poem, enjoyed the read. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh my......oh my.....this is mmmmmm.....love I guess.... love it.... Charisma |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Lovely poem. Excellent writing... Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
A time just for holding Until morning light Hours for dancing In my arms through the night The darkness will cover Each warming each Wrapped in our love Real love we can teach Sunrise will wake us We'll kiss freely and joyful The wetness we're sharing Schemes met in a mouthful =================== True passion pervades us Born of intimate knowing Our hearts are on fire But with true love glowing So time has no meaning When with you it’s measured Every infinite instant Is totally treasured ============= my goodness ... what a romantic lovely vision Im both jealous and exhausted LOL  superb Wil ... keep those fires and that pen lit later-swoon to the moon-gator jm Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved it |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You are a man who knows just how to turn an instant into infinity... Nicely done, my friend..  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Wow...the night is alight with stars...this is wonderful... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Our moment starts now With each word and each sigh In a loving dimension Real time passes by So time has no meaning When with you it’s measured Every infinite instant Is totally treasured ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Wilfred, I particularly adored the above which I quote... This poem you write is so tender and sweet and ohhhhhhhhhhh soooooooooo romantic... Thank you sweetie for this delightful read coco [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 12-17-2000).] |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
you seem so happy....it really shows my friend... Happy Holidays..Greeneyes *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
So very loving and tender...she is a special lady to recieve such beautiful thoughts |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Most beautifully romantic, Bill. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
I'm overwhelmed by your outpouring - I can only say - she deserves every word - she keeps me going through my tough times - thank you |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Wilfred Yeats, Wow this is beautiful, I really loved this one, thank you. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Attending to the various annexes of my library, I see that this was not appropriately marked the first time! Heavens help me...I need to find my marbles again...but this surely hasn't been read by everyone, so indeed, a BTTT won't hurt a bit, and now! This is firmly placed in my own library!...[I'm sure Freud would give me grief, perhaps?] Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Cerenity - Sunshine - Thank you - thank you - thank you |
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