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. . . I love you . . . |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Just the two of us committed to each other no reservations have we only longing resides here where other thoughts once called home There is one small word that talks only about me and that word is "I" I give you my life take my heart for it is yours I shall need it not uconditionally yours tke tenderly to your care Yet another word speaks so emotionally and that word is "love" You give me your love I cherish it forever I give you my love and you have humbled me so you take my love as your love There is a third word that does not talk about we and that word is "you" You whom I adore the reason for my being you on pedestal far above all others here you, the woman of my dreams Three words, I love you what more can I say my love I love you, I do. < !signature--> Live for love. Without love, you don't live. [This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 12-17-2000).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Yanno...I've been thinking on this one, and for the past few days, I have been pondering that there is no way to improve upon the simple words ...i love you...not when they are said by the right person. Simple, sweet and profound poetry for the heart. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
What a loving poem. I love it. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Very good feart felt writing. I really liked this work of yours. Love and light, Richard |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
very romantic inteloper  well done Maree < !signature--> "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this wouldn't be enough" "Maree Russo" [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 12-17-2000).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Can they ever be said often enough to the person we love the most? For some those words go unheard...for others unsaid...but for some, no words need be said when all of the action is there...for every action levels a reaction in kind... Well done Interloper... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
three words simple said "I love you".... but contain tenderness and care, not simple done.....wonderful expressed. Charisma |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Interloper, Beautifully said and to the point. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
You had to know I'd love this romantic poem......  this is just beautiful!! -SEA |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'You whom I adore the reason for my being you on pedestal far above all others here you, the woman of my dreams Three words, I love you what more can I say my love I love you, I do.' Wonderfully put, Interloper! Excellent work! Love it!! sp I won't go; I won't sleep; I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
what else can one say but that you wrote a very moving piece here ~soft smiles ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
serenity~ I agree ... just no better way. Poeminister~ Thank you. Glad you liked it. maxtec1~ My first time to hear from you. Thanks for the read. Sunshine~ I think the words must be said in addition to showing by action. We are multi-sensory, emotional beings and no one form of communication works to perfection by itself. We must show our love by action, speak our love with words, and show our love by touch... so it says here Charisma~ Thanks for the wonderful words. DarkAngel~ Romance is good, isn't it? LoneWolf~ My first time to hear from you. Thanks. SEA~ Yes, you are one of the very special people I care about liking my work. snowpants~ I am so happy you love it so. WOW! nakdthoughts~ Your words move me. Thank you Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Wasn't disagreeing...they should always be said...and then followed through...{~,^}...but some think because they think it is "enough"...sad to say, hey? Tell me, show me...I think my ancestors had a bit of Missouri... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sunshine~ Amen. Think they might be neighbors of my son? Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* the most wonderful words one can say. This was beautiful. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
"and you have humbled me so" I don't know what it was about this line...but my heart stopped... It is so true when you love someone... I can't say enough...Lovely!..Beautiful!...and humbling.. I love the time and in between the calm inside me in the space where I can breathe... Sarah McLachlan |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Startime~ *sigh* back to you Breathe~ Hope you didn't have to call the paramedics High praise indeed and I am grateful.Adieu until after Christmas. MERRY CHRISTMAS my friends ... and I DO love you all Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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