Open Poetry #11 |
'Choices' |
Lily B Member
since 2000-03-31
Posts 91Auburn, IN, US |
Choices Looking back upon my years, I see mistakes I've made and marvel at their impact on this mortal path I pave. Each fork and turn is lined in thorns with markers etched in stone, forevermore reminding me of choices that I own. I dare not blame heredity, or childhood traumas faced, for bringing me to where I stand with innocence misplaced. I'd like to think I still have hope of reaching my redemption, but don't know if I trust myself to learn from every lesson. I cannot chart direction when no master plan exists, and time will not fold back for me to replay what I've missed. So I'll plod on, with good intent and hoping for the best, to blindly make my way through life while God decides the rest. ~Julie A. Remke~ © December 16, 2000 All Rights Reserved. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This an excellent poem about reflections on life and you have written it very well!! Good work Julie!! |
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Lily B Member
since 2000-03-31
Posts 91Auburn, IN, US |
THANK YOU so very much, Ethome!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LilyB~ A neat little package of life's lessons, tied up nicely. Thanks for sharing. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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shira Member
since 2000-12-12
Posts 88Hamburg, PA |
This is wonderful, and it really makes me think. I can relate well, as I am in the midst of rehashing my past and making some new decisions in my life. Very nice poem. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
what a piece of work this is, it is outright and honest and speaks to me. Loved it. "If you live to be a hundred, I want to live to be a hundred minus one day, so I never have to live without you." Winnie the Pooh |
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Lily B Member
since 2000-03-31
Posts 91Auburn, IN, US |
Thanks to all of you for the kind words! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh I loved this, very well written indeed! Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this wouldn't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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