Open Poetry #11 |
Passions Gallery--Victoria (flaxen memories) |
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
from her flaxen memories come words of lace spun from thread of pen and woven on loom of page delicate and fragile like finest of fabric for which a world of sackcloth yearns to be clothed in for warmth in colors of thread the spectrum of rainbows offering to you all her memories woven in time --------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sven, your words describe her perfectly..she is woven of the finest threads and colored in the softest hues...a tapestry to behold....and treasure... ~softsmiles ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is lovely, and delicately enfolds what is Victoria...well done Sven... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you very much sven ..a very lovely poem which i am proud to be associated ..i appreciate your sweet words ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very nice description of our Victoria Sven.. I really love the wonderful images she creates....take care ethome |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
to a "T" she is a wonderful writer.... Greeneyes "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sven, What else can I say, but "Incredible". Elise |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Wynter, indeed she is my friend. . . thank you. . . Sunshine, like a blanket you always want to carry with you. . . ethome, I do too. . . they're always wonderful. . . Greeneyes, yes she is. . . and that's what I've tried to show here. . . thank you. . . Elise, that will do. . . thank you. . . Victoria, my friend, indeed your words are like the finest of cloth, covering us with your words of love and light. . . thank you for sharing with us, and may you continue to share with us for many years. . . --------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
All I can do is agree with all of the above. Brilliant portrayal of Victoria. Sandra |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sven, after reading this, I'm absolutely convinced you have a mgic mirror somewhere. Write on Kethry Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sven~ Excellent write, expressed so very well what Victoria is all about....another fine write my friend Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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