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Sven
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0 posted 2000-12-16 10:58 PM


from her flaxen memories
come words of lace
spun from thread of pen
and woven on loom of page

delicate and fragile
like finest of fabric
for which a world of sackcloth
yearns to be clothed in for warmth

in colors of thread
the spectrum of rainbows
offering to you all
her memories woven in time

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2000-12-16 11:06 PM


Sven, your words describe her perfectly..she is woven of the finest threads and colored in the softest hues...a tapestry to behold....and treasure...

~softsmiles
~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II


Sunshine
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2 posted 2000-12-16 11:13 PM


This is lovely, and delicately enfolds what is Victoria...well done Sven...

Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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3 posted 2000-12-16 11:20 PM


Thank you very much sven ..a very lovely poem which i am proud to be associated ..i appreciate your sweet words

                  ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


ethome
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4 posted 2000-12-17 03:12 AM


Very nice description of our Victoria Sven.. I really love the wonderful images she creates....take care   ethome
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5 posted 2000-12-17 03:25 AM


to a "T" she is a wonderful writer....


Greeneyes


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6 posted 2000-12-17 10:26 AM


Sven,
   What else can I say, but "Incredible".
               Elise

Sven
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7 posted 2000-12-17 07:58 PM


Wynter, indeed she is my friend. . . thank you. . .  

Sunshine, like a blanket you always want to carry with you. . .

ethome, I do too. . . they're always wonderful. . .

Greeneyes, yes she is. . . and that's what I've tried to show here. . . thank you. . .

Elise, that will do. . . thank you. . .  

Victoria, my friend, indeed your words are like the finest of cloth, covering us with your words of love and light. . . thank you for sharing with us, and may you continue to share with us for many years. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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8 posted 2000-12-17 08:57 PM


All I can do is agree with all of the above.
Brilliant portrayal of Victoria.
Sandra

Kethry
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9 posted 2000-12-18 08:52 PM


Sven,
after reading this, I'm absolutely convinced you have a mgic mirror somewhere.
Write on
Kethry


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tracie66
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10 posted 2000-12-19 05:06 AM


Sven~
Excellent write, expressed so very well what Victoria is all about....another fine write my friend
Tracie~


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It is the harmony of the universe



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