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i wish i knew |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida 
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started rummaging..had a few things i needed to find..to ease my soul today...  heres another one for daddy.. ---------------------------------------------------- how do you make the wind stop blowing when its chill is to the bone how do you make the rain stop falling when the clouds just have to let go sometimes i wish i could forget you then the pain would ebb away... other times i long to hold you i want to make you stay how do you make the sun stop shining when you need the cloak of night how do you make the stars stop laughing when you need to see the light how do you make the moon keep smiling once its scattered morning dew-- daddy... oh daddy, i wish i knew 2-17-93 |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Very neat my friend. I've a few Daddy poems of my own, but not so neat. jwesley |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
i thank you JWESLEY .. i'd like to read some of your 'daddy poems'--are they posted here in the blue pages?hugs, fallen |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Fallen Rain, How indeed? You've expressed yourself well here, the mixed emotions of letting go, yet wanting to hang on to one so dear. Great writing! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Nope, not posted. Will see if I can find any...I've scribbles stuck everywhere. jwesley |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Enjoyed it a lot!!!! |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
A wonderful tribute to your dad...I know your poem will make him proud! Nathan |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Enjoyed it a lot!!!! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wonderful my friend. . . if indeed we all knew. . . ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
DEN..i thank you my friend JWES..i understand the scribbles stuck everywhere..i tend to lose my stuff occasionally! please let me know if you find one to post VANDANA..thank you..i'm glad you enjoyed the read thanks DOGG i wish i could hand him these things personally..... one day.. SVEN..wouldnt it make life easier to know such things.. hugs, fallen "the beginning of wisdom is, 'i do not know'" -unknown |
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