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| Open Poetry #11 |
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Mid-December |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA 
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Mid-December. Insomnia. Dreams don’t come easy. The clock’s steady meter resounds, -- displeasing. Lean on the window and listen to the winter’s Heart-moving symphony. Warm breath. Shivering lips mark the window,-- A sudden epiphany. Naked branches sway to the rhythm, -- freezing! Thus starts a poem. Thus the Muses control us, teasing Us with the winds’ wailing. Thus cold fingers Become anxious to write. Thus, seducing the soul, the hour-hand lingers To move any further tonight. < !signature--> Check out my poetry here: http://cafepoetry.com/stage1/andrey_kneller.htm#My%20Hamlet [This message has been edited by Master (edited 12-16-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Master~ This is just an intriguing piece. 'Put your ear to the window and listen to the winter’s Heart-moving symphony.' Slightly chilled thoughts moving the muses about. Of course I'm sitting down here in Florida with 80 degrees of sunshine today ... so mine hummed to the sound of the air-conditioner. *smiles* to you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Magre, you wanna trade places and live here in NY? I miss the 80 degree weather! Thanks for your reply! |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Nice Job Master. Enjoyed this Rich |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Master~ Thanks for the invite. I think I'll pass. I spent five months in New York at a writer's retreat in the Catskills. November - March ... COLDEST I've EVER been ! But - I'll think warmly of you !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
nicely done and I agree with Marge I enjoyed the same lines..now look...  that cold weather in New York isn't all that bad is it? Doesn't it give you nature's beauty to write about..I am only slightly below you in PA and I love the coldness..makes me know I am alive...just teasing you..it does get bitter sometimes..but you can always warm up...you can't always get cool enough in the heat of the south... ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Very cool poem. (I didn't mean the pun, I swear!) Mike |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Thanks guys, I'm glad you liked the poem. Check out my poetry here: http://cafepoetry.com/stage1/andrey_kneller.htm#My%20Hamlet |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
I revised it a bit, does it sound better now? |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love reading and enjoyed it. well done. Charisma |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! |
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