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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware 
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Need (Minor revision of a 2/2000 post) (Early) You look at me One glance My eyes You see You feel My need You No fear Instantly In my arms Your eyes Register The same longing We just hold A long hug Savor the closeness Two bodies Sharing electricity Exchanging heat Our heads move then Share a kiss Longer Soft Open Deep As your need Builds Matching mine Time disappears Oblivious of everything But us (Much Later) You say, "Are you still hungry" With a grin I reply, "I'm up for what you are." There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~Janet Mar |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Hey WY~ I'm ALWAYS hungry  This is very hot! Enjoyed this very much!  -SEA |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Sea - You know what? Me too Thank you - the devil made me do it |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Hey, add me to this (growing) list of hungry. Wonderful write, my friend. jwesley |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Bill, you really know how to pen them don't you?? Wonderful from you Sir. .. ----------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
too quick the glance chanced romance before the good bye I so enjoy being inspired by you... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
MMMMMM how about some french toast...with warm sweet syrup...I'll let you lick my fingers hehehe...love this one [This message has been edited by Paula Finn (edited 12-16-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Our heads move then Share a kiss Longer Soft Open Deep As your need Builds Matching mine Time disappears Oblivious of everything But us ================= *sigh* I almost remember what this is like... excellent expressions nicey and spicy  later-sensual-gator jm Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Oh that magic hunger! Very good WY you got the mood goin here in this one ...go get'em tiger! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
It's sort of like Chinese food, isn't it? Very, very nice work here Wilfred. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
*L* if the devil made you do it I can see why...beautiful bill...always Greeneyes~ "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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shira Member
since 2000-12-12
Posts 88Hamburg, PA |
This is SO lovely and sensitive, and true to feeling.. I love it. I really do. |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Very good..I liked this alot..I have to agree with everyone else..Made me Hungry as well... ~LL~The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
I'm so happy I whetted everyone's appetite Thank you all so much |
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