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Wicked Witch of the East
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0 posted 2000-12-16 02:58 PM



Each night before I close my eyes,
I thank the Lord for midnight skies,
For crescent moons, the stars above,
And most of all, for you my love.

I never knew what odists meant,
When they penned of heaven sent,
Until the day, that I met you,
Until the day, that I loved you.

At eighteen years, a life begun,
For thirty years, we've lived as one,
Four children raised, to college sent,
With just a tad, of Dad's cash spent.

And now once more, just two as one,
A new day starts, with rising sun.

© Copyright 2000 Wicked Witch of the East - All Rights Reserved
inot2B
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1 posted 2000-12-16 03:02 PM


You have done an excellent job. A poem and  life, what more could one ask. I hope your wife and children appreciate you.
Elizabeth
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2 posted 2000-12-16 03:04 PM


Excellent indeed...a new day with your love beside you is truly a gift from God.
Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
3 posted 2000-12-16 03:50 PM


A special gift
to you is sent.
To spend the days
of merriment,
found within the midnight skies
of one who still shines brightest
in the morning sun
reflected in your eyes.

*This just happens to be a tender moment.
Happy Holidays to you.
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Martie
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4 posted 2000-12-16 04:32 PM


Hey witchy...You are blessed...this is so tenderly written!  Happy holidays to you!
Nan
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Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
5 posted 2000-12-16 07:27 PM


Give "C" a big ole Passionate Hug... Nicely done, WWoftheE...
Justin Kace
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since 1999-09-13
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Oz
6 posted 2000-12-17 09:38 AM


Justin Kace your WickedNess
Escaped imPassioned eye
I'll send this back up to page one
For readers passing by...

Lady Lightning
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since 2000-12-04
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Kentucky
7 posted 2000-12-17 10:06 AM


How very, very sweet...Luck family you have there..   ~LL~

The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown

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