»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #11
»
I Will.....With Love
| Open Poetry #11 |
|
I Will.....With Love |
|
|
Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
|
I Will.....With Love Karen Torbiak 2000 Whisper my name to the wind send it flying over the miles tell it to play softly in my ear say it with love in your voice I Will come to you With Love Reach out your hand to me make it strong to hold tight have it opened to receive me freely let sparks fly as fingers touch I Will take it gladly With Love Write words of love to me make them gentle and understanding let them fire the page with passion write them from your loving heart I Will read them and melt With Love Talk of dreams and fantasy to me share worlds of forgotten magic take me soaring to the stars weave dreams for just us two I Will listen and sigh With Love Open your heart and soul to me share life’s joys and fears give trust and love completely open to me unconditionally I Will hold your heart safe With Love http://www.geocities.com/karenltorbiak/index.html |
||
| © Copyright 2000 Karen Torbiak - All Rights Reserved | |||
Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
This is full of love...must have been quite an honor for him to receive. |
||
|
Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* sad but this is not written for anyone. There is no one in my life so all my poetry is pure fantasy. I am really glad you enjoyed it. Much love to you from me. http://www.geocities.com/karenltorbiak/index.html |
||
|
maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Big sigh. I loved the feel of this. Love and light, Richard |
||
vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Like this very much!!!!!!  |
||
|
athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Startime, This was inredible! You put onto paper how love is the very essence of life and the soul. Beautiful!! Much love, Elise |
||
|
Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
With voice of golden nightengale, she sings upon the wind, Odes that whisper in our ears, as love to us does send. Beautiful poetry you have written here. |
||
|
Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Open your heart and soul to me share life’s joys and fears give trust and love completely open to me unconditionally I Will hold your heart safe With Love This is so pretty..I love the way you write ..Hard to imagine there isn't anyone in your life to see all this beauty..But that time will come and whoever it is will be oh so lucky...This one is another keeper.. ~LL~The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
||
|
John R Member
since 2000-12-14
Posts 141Toledo OH |
Hi Karen For love to be true, it should be given unconditionally. A beautiful poem. If a dream touches us, it exists to us as anything else that touches us. |
||
|
Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Richard Thank you, dear friend. I knew with your loving heart you would enjoy this one. Much love to you from me. Vandana Thank you so much. I am glad you enjoyed it. Much love to you from me. athena4 *sigh* so sweet of you to say that, dear one. Your comments are always so loving. Much love to you from me. Mike Such a wonderful comment with verse that is beautiful and loving. I love your response, my friend, and I am so very glad you liked this poem. Much love to you from me. Lady Lighting *sigh* many people are afraid of the way love flows from me. Maybe someday I will find the unusual man who can match the softness of my heart with the passions that burn in me. Thank you so much for your wonderful comment. Much love to you from me. JohnR Sweet man, it is always a pleasure to know that my poem has touched the beautiful heart that you have. *sigh*you are right, dear friend, love has to be unconditional. Much love to you from me. http://www.geocities.com/karenltorbiak/index.html |
||
|
Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Karen, you WILL find that man....because he's out there and you are looking....never lose hope....it's obvious in your words you have much to give...this is wonderful |
||
|
CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Star, this is indeed a beautiful weave of love... Thanks for sharing I enjoyed this read... coco |
||
|
Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Startime Karen, One day Love will find you, I know she will, and a heart as open and loving as yours is will be a haven for her. I believe in fate I believe in truth and love and beauty and it will be there for you. This is a wonderful poem by you, excellant writing. It really is. Take care Mushy Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
||
|
Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
fantasy or not..very lovely indeed.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
||
|
Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love this wonderful weaven piece. wonderful imagery.....excellent my friend ((hugs)) Charisma |
||
|
Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Sir Balladeer Thank you for your words of encouragement.*sigh* Maybe. Much love to you from me. CoCoBaci *grin* thank you so much. I am glad your liked it. Much love to you from me. Marsha *sigh* sweet one, you are just so full of love. I love it. You warm everyone you touch. Thank you so very much. Much love to you from me. Victoria Yep, sometimes fantasy gives us hope for reality. Much love to you from me. Charisma *giggling* thanks. You know how I love to weave. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
||
|
ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Someday you'll wrap that great big heart around a love that will be true...very well written!! |
||
|
Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Startime, I gift of love wrapped in imagination. I can think of nothing better and no-one better to do it. Be well and tell Kethry Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon. |
||
SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
With a heart as beautiful as yours, you should have no trouble finding that special love -SEA |
||
|
Jaime Fradera Senior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 843Where no tyranny is tolerable |
O, Karen this is very reassuring. I think the piece was I walk with love, and thought of asking for it, but one reading was all I could do. It is so I can not find the words. The titles of your pieces are a little different, but more and more, the universal theme you end up with is always the same. O, Karen, how can any reader not respond when with each new piece your intreaties to be loved and held close and dear, to take your hand, to share your body, and join and share all with you in spirit and magic, fantasy and soul, get stonger and more explicitt? O, Karen...the way you open your heart and bare your soul to "strangers" in the faith and hope that maybe some one ... I have no doubt that many if not most who read you in the poetry forum feel the same wonder, even if they don't get around to writing. Lately your poems have just been jumping out at me with such immidiacy that at times they are too much... and in Mexico and Latin Europe, where it is acceptable for guys to express feeling and hug each other, this would all be thought nautural, and healthy, and good. O, Karen... know that this is written from the heart. You are even more real than fantasy, and too dear ever ever to be left feeling lonely and ignored. And if it would help, please know that anytime you want to be or talk with me, I will always want to be on the other side of your modem, as I can no longer hear well enough to use the phone. and I am not yet skilled enough in the use of the computer as I would like to be. and I promise never again to worry about writing you too often or asking for too much, and I can not imagine anyone who reads and loves your words and spirit could feel any differently. To this Latin heart, you seem almost like a wonderous fantasy come real, if only I will read, and let you take me into a fantasy of your own. Please take me, dear Karen! Take me! Take me! Take me! ... Love from me to you Jaime. Hey, I forgot to ask for your other site? and about the pictures, you can just describe them to me. After all, why not get it straight from the artist??????? Jaime slowly fades away again ... ... ... ... ... ... ________________________________________________________________ All that you are seeking is also seeking you |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
