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In the Shy of the Light.................
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In the Shy of the Light................. |
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Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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 In the Shy of the Light there is a moment of peace that with vibration softly hums when first the earliest light of shy green sunrise comes nanosecond split of light breaking 'way from the night in this moment, shy of day as emerald eyes come to play not many see this emerald revealed in sunrise's prism first unveiled except those who arise with thee come stand in early, watch with me then through the passage of the day the Sun attends its charted way there is a moment of peace around that with vibration softly sounds when first the sunset shimmers last and purple first comes to cast soft twilight filters over all and takes with it into the night the set of day in all its bright soft now into this purple twilight and in this peace come to me cherish always how it should be that as day has passed to the night emerald eyes now in the shy of light  Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
VERY..VERY..NICE... i'm not usually caught up in nature poetry..but this..this is awesome stuff sunshine..very wonderful! thanks for sharing this with us! hugs, g "people who need people are the luckiest people..." barbra s. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"not many see this emerald revealed in sunrise's prism first unveiled except those who arise with thee come stand in early, watch with me" (I'm up at 5 am M-F.......I get to see the sun rise every day of the week.......on the weekends.......I better not be up before 7  )This is gorgeous.......the picture of the marina makes me miss the ocean so bad......beautiful pictures!  Beautiful poem -SEA |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
dg, perhaps some of us "nature lovers" can convert you...LOL...glad you enjoyed...thank you... SEA...I awake at 5 every day...regardless of clocks or alarms...glad you liked the graphics...thank you for your comments... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
a very serene and beautiful poem. I could gaze at such a scene for hours, give me a call next time you witness such splendour. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Lovely, lovely, lovely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sunshine, I know that moment well and you have described it perfectly..it is a moment of such peace and quiet and beauty...the soft beginning of day creating reds, yellows, purples, and a myriad of colors that are not seen the rest of the day....and the quiet is so crystal clear...it is a sight that no one can look at and not believe that God exists....thank you for the view from your pen.... |
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John R Member
since 2000-12-14
Posts 141Toledo OH |
Beautiful and well versed poem. There was a movie that made mention of the flash of green, but I can't remember which one. It was aboard ship at sunrise. If a dream touches us, it exists to us as anything else that touches us. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I felt that peace as I read through this magnificent poem. Thank you so much for sharing the vision. Much love to you from me. http://www.geocities.com/karenltorbiak/index.html |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari, this is indeed one of your utter best. It is so beautiful it's really terrific, you are so good when you write about this love. Really great and wonderful writing, as always. Do I love it? Don't I always? I only tell the truth love.  It's the best  Take care Majestic Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh my......what a beautiful description of this part of the day.......great imagery, and the graphics fits it well..... superb Kari ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sunshine, this is truly lovely imagery. You have captured the essence of the moment oh so well. Well done my friend. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free. ~me~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sunshine, Wonderful imagery and graphics. They go so well together. Beautiful poem. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Third attempt at posting to this beautiful piece. Well for sure you captured me with the imagery and the beauty within your words and this one most definitely goes in my library under "Peaceful Moments From Heaven". Now who is getting the imagery lessons? I do believe it would be me. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
in the sun's light are dreams known and lessons learned for the light is a teacher and we, the students. . . wonderful Sunshine. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
breathtakingly beautiful, sunshine...I love the title too and as Mark is doing I am saving this one to lift me up on those other days..thank you ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very lovely. Anything close to the water is perfect for me, though I remember sunsets in California the most of all. (I am not an early morning girl ) Enjoy 5AM tomorrow. Sandra |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Brian, I'll give you a call...but I don't meet many who get up as early as I do...LOL...thanks for coming in for the read... Marge, thanks thanks thanks.... 'Deer, the view is from my eyes and just stemmed to my pen...thank you for your lovely commentary...isn't it nice to share all of this with each other through His grace?... John R...I had read of such in an article, but if you ever come across the title of the movie, let us know?...thank you... Startime, you are quite welcome, thank you for reading... Marsha, we all know you don't answer unless you love it...utter thanks right back at you... Thank you Charisma...Gentle Spirit...and Charisma... um Mark? What happened to the first two attempts? LOL...thank you, I have been learning from the masters, believe me!... Sven, what a unique comment, thank you... Wynter, titles do pull one in, don't they...thank you!... I promise I won't call, Sandra...unless you letl me know first...thanks for reading... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Calm, cosy, creative, comforting, caring poem about mother nature...my eyes sagged with the peace of it all.....See ya Sunshine at sunrise!! |
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Cassandra Junior Member
since 2000-12-16
Posts 48Charlotte, North Carolina, USA |
Just getting home from a very stressful night at work... reading this has soothed me a great deal. Beauty describe at its best you've not only shown beauty but you've written it! Excellent! --Cassandra |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ethome, you up yet? Still dark out 'round here...it's going to be a good day! Wuld have answered sooner but had to let the dog out...Thank you... Cassandra, you have the lovely name of a dear friend of mine from years back that I've lost touch with...Welcome to Passions. Glad to hear that you are enjoying the poets around here...it's a wonderful home. Merry Christmas to you! Thank you for reading... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
OH MY GOODNESS, IT'S BEAUTIFUL, YOU ARE THRILLING ME WITH THESE PICTURES AND THIS LOVELY POETRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! "If you live to be a hundred, I want to live to be a hundred minus one day, so I never have to live without you." Winnie the Pooh |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sunshine, "Emerald eyes now in the shy of light". You've opend up a door to a utopia! Beautiful. Elise |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Irish, my goodness, you're happy...thank you!... Athena, that's my favorite line too...thank you for noticing... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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