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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sayonara Did you know I was starting to fall in love with you and for reasons unknown to me you suddenly said we were through. And although I'm pretty sure I appreciated you more than any other woman I have known before perhaps I did all you would require of me and you simply were not desiring my affection any more. So I can go or I can stay. You can hold me close or push me away. Hey, this is no big deal for me. I'll simply be exactly what you want me to be. The lesson learned is to carefully kiss your friends. Know the place where friendship ends and love begins. And no matter what you say or do don't fall in love with her til your absolutely sure she's fallen in love with you. Sayonara... Jameslee@December15,2000 |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
James, would that it was that simple. brilliant piece from you, I really love this one. Great work Take care Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
James~ I'm sorry she isn't smart enough to realize how wonderful you are........there is a woman out there that will give as much as you do....she will love you and give you all you need and so richly deserve.......  -SEA |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Marsha and Sea...I appreciate your responses..James |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The lesson learned is to carefully kiss your friends. Know the place where friendship ends and love begins. And no matter what you say or do don't fall in love with her til your absolutely sure she's fallen in love with you. ================= Sweetbabyjames...there is more wisdom in that verse than I have words for... and I know its a hard learned lesson ... one of those "kicked in the chest" lessons of the heart... seems like we learn em all the hard way dont it? yeah I know never the less this is another sincere, honest write by you. Im glad I didnt miss it.. cant keep up anymore these pages move so fast now later wise poet-gator jm Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
James .....how I wished for you that love could be find simple....without pain and desire. and there will be a mrs. right, somewhere....I am sure about that my friend ((warm hugs)) Charisma |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
this was a heartfelt intense read...i thank you for sharing and i hope things get better for you soon.... |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
James, very good poem, but I'm afraid you'll never really know about when love comes around, Sometimes love doesn't always show it's face in the beginning, give it time. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
James hon...I know where this is coming from...and babe...I am here for you you know that...scuffing my toes here in the snow...dreaming of that Waikiki sand... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Janet thank you for your tender words..know what you mean about pages moving fast.. Charisma I am first looking for an honest and sincere friendship from which love will grow. She has to be a good kisser...this one always gets me into trouble.. kaile I think they already have..enjoy hearing from sincere people. Rosebud I am willing to give love time...when feelings grow in my heart they stay and wait patiently for the others feelings to grow...and then we have some interesting possibilities... Paula you are the sweetest...I appreciate your sincerity...will be headed to California soon for Christmas with my mom, my sons, brothers and sisters, and old friends. Hope you all have a merry Christmas. Love and kisses...James |
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