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maxtec1
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since 2000-12-09
Posts 577
Garland, Tx

0 posted 2000-12-15 11:40 PM



Secret Loving Place
By Richard Maxfield
8-9-2000

In hot passion’s desire
I lay you in field of green
To give you love
Like you have never seen

Exploring pleasures
Few have ever known
Love’s heat of passion
Awaits to be shown

Touching gentle skin
Kissing all your love
With tender softness
Like wings of a dove

Variable to my kiss
Your passions arise
Ever increasing elation
Feel of your thighs

Moans of delight
Echoing across the field
Loves in our hearts
Forever to be sealed

Bodies flushed with blood
From racing of our heart
Lovers entangled bodies
Never to be apart

Drowning in fulfillment
Fires burning deep
It’s hard to catch your breath
This moment we shall keep

Peaking pasted the point
You have never been
Thrashing mussels tighten
Full release and then

Soft tender kiss
Placed upon your face
Forever this is our
Secret loving place


Live like there is a tomorrow.

© Copyright 2000 Richard Maxfield - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
1 posted 2000-12-16 06:29 PM


sounds nice...*s

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II


Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
2 posted 2000-12-16 07:53 PM


Wow, this sounds fabulous.  The perfect day.

LW


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

Lady Lightning
Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422
Kentucky
3 posted 2000-12-17 10:32 AM


well you know I couldn't let this one get by me...   Very romantic Richard...Have any idea where this place is?     ~LL~

The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown

maxtec1
Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577
Garland, Tx
4 posted 2000-12-17 11:55 AM


Oh yes dear I know where and why just not who.
LOL I know Im a bad boy. I have some poems of a little moreof romantic adult sort. They are not bad but not sure ifI should post then here.
Love and light,
Richard

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