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Passion's Gallery -- Sven (a patron's view)
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Passion's Gallery -- Sven (a patron's view) |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
words echo inside his heart reverberating throughout each part they are ingrained on his soul their very essence make him whole within he is many things a glimpse is shown in the gifts he brings each day he wears a different hat watch and see where it's at he is a poet as you know tales of romance from his pen flow he captures us with his dreams where nothing is as it seems he is also a knight true whose pride shines through armor new he battles for the maiden fair who is the reason for the scars he bears an instrumentalist first was he the music he makes could mesmerize thee notes cascading through the wind causing melodies and harmonies together to spin a singer of numerous songs expressing the love for which he longs his voice is soft and so sweet articulate beyond any you'll meet an artist in every way shown in the things he does and has to say creativity flourishes within his breast never leaving him a moment to rest this is a peek at the man I know a view of the sides he seldom shows walking through Passion's Gallery his portrait seems to speak to me ---------------------------------------------------- Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a lovely and glowing tribute to Sven, Lone Wolf. You've captured the essence of his soul in this beautiful poem ... very nicely written!  Best wishes, and hugs to you both, /Kit [This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 12-15-2000).] |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Indeed a splendid write LoneWolf... I'm sure he will treasure this tribute of a jewel... Hugs2U coco |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
sven will love it im sure..beautifully written ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
LoneWolf, you have written a beautiful portrait... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Jennifer, your pen is full of kindness, compassion and dignity. "If you live to be a hundred, I want to live to be a hundred minus one day, so I never have to live without you." Winnie the Pooh |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Kit . . . Thank you very much. I just wanted to show you all what I see in him. This is it. Who knows him better than I do? hugs back. Coco . . . Thank you my friend. Victoria . . . I know he does. Thanks. Sunshine . . . Thank you very much. Came from the heart. Kathleen . . . My dear friend, thank you from the bottom of my heart. Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
LW, thank you for your words. . . they are indeed a fine addition to the Gallery. . . and I am pleased to have them hanging here. . . Thank you again. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Such a special poem, for a very special poet. Much enjoyed. Sandra |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoneWolf~ Not only are you an outstanding poet - you are an artist of magnitude. Gently you've stroked the canvas and painted a masterpiece of Sven~ Sven, the curator of the gallery - has just been framed!  Who indeed knows him better ! THIS IS WONDERFUL ! Love n' hugs to BOTH of you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Lone Wolf I guess we're on the same wavelength writing about Sven. I really like this one and I'm so glad you put these thoughts down on paper as I feel he deserves them so much...excellent words of kindness!! ethome |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You are quite a lady, LW! and this is just heartwarming touching and beautiful! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sven . . .You are welcome for the words and I am glad you agreed to let me do this under the Passions Gallery Title. I am pleased to have them hanging here also. Sandra . . . Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks. Marge . . . Your compliments have left me speechless my dear friend. I figured who better to frame Sven than his wife!! LOL. Glad you liked it. Love 'n hugs from us to you!! ethome . . . This one has been in the works a while, but Sven asked me to wait until his 5000th to post it and I agreed. I am glad you enjoyed the read. A look at the many sides of Sven I guess. serenity . . . Thank you my friend. You are quite a lady also. < !signature--> Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats [This message has been edited by Lone Wolf (edited 12-17-2000).] |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
lovely tribute for our wonderful poet... you captured him very well... wonderful penned my friend ((hugs)) Charisma |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
LW Hi my friend This is so beautifully penned and so true...you have captured the essence of one fine poet and man...well done hon Your friend Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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