Open Poetry #11 |
Stairway to Heaven... |
Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
You heard the painful news today As our eyes connected across the room All at once like lighting had hit I all too suddenly knew The tears streamed down your face As I slowly reached out my hand Trying as hard as I could To convey that I truly understand You pushed me away in anger But I am not mad at you I only wish I could have said more That there was more that I could do Your dad is with my mom now As she hugs him with wings of gold Just as I'll be there to hold you Whenever you shall get tired and cold When my mom died It was like the wind was knocked out of me And I thought the pain and anger I felt Would last an eternity But I promise you that in time The pain begins to slowly ease And they are always here with us Their presence will never cease If ever you need a friend Or just someone to talk to Do not hesitate to call on me I'll be a friend that's forever true ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ *a verse i wrote shortly after my mom died that's never been posted* there's a stairway to heaven it's paved of the finest gold the love that radiates from that special place will keep you warm even in the harshest cold that stairway to heaven can be seen by even those blind and the trail can be traveled from the tears cried by those left behind that stairway heaven connects them to us until we can see them again they are loved and taken care of by the Lord above amys note: written for a special friend of mine. she lost her father today while we were at work. ~amy m. kennedy~ [This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 12-15-2000).] |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Amy, your beautiful heart is in every word here..this is beautiful work |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Amy, what a beautiful poem and I thank you for sharing of your loving heart... Hugs2uPoetFriend coco |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Both poems are so touching and beautiful Amy. You are a wonderful and understanding friend who knows too well, the sorrow of this loss ... I'm so sorry for this sadness. Hugs to you both ... Best wishes, /Kit |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
there's a stairway to heaven it's paved of the finest gold the love that radiates from that special place will keep you warm even in the harshest cold that stairway to heaven can be seen by even those blind and the trail can be traveled from the tears cried by those left behind ================ beautiful sunshine ... and she is lucky to have you in this time ... very touching writing love ya girlie jan Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
You Amy your heart is very big. I'm glad your friend has you there with her. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Amy...James |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Amy, Oh love this is so beautiful, and so softly tender, written with your heart of gold. Both of these poems are truly marvellous, and I love them. You are right time does heal, makes the edges less cutting and the pain less sharp. The pain and the loss don't ever depart they just stay in a sore spot in your heart. Look to the light love, and if you need me then you know where I am. Just send me an E and I'll send you back a smile and a hug Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Bal~ thanks for your lovely reply. whenever you respond to my work you always leave me with a huge smile Coco~ thanks for reading, and you're welcome. thank you for sharing yours as well. take care! Kit~ a response from you is like an extra rainbow to my day. thank you, for your understanding and also for being able to relate to me. Janet~ thanks a million my dear friend. am glad to be your "sunshine girl" any time of the day or week. i am lucky to have her as well. love ya inot2b~ awwww thanks for that sweet compliment! you are pretty special yourself. thanks also for taking the time to read and respond. James~ thanks for the very nice take care. Marsha~ thanks as always for your lovely reply to my work. as always you make me smile. for that i thank you very much! and also always remember if ever you need me i am here for you as well. i'll email ya later take care thank you all for taking the time to read this! love, amy ~A true friend is one soul in two bodies~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Amy you have a very kind and beautiful heart I really appreciated the way you were thinking when you wrote this....take care... ethome |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'If ever you need a friend Or just someone to talk to Do not hesitate to call on me I'll be a friend that's forever true' Aim, this is a perfect mirror image of your heart, and I can say that because I know. You truly are a great friend, and, what goes around comes around, remember? Excellent work, m'friend! -e ~~~~~~~ 'cause I am hanging on every word you say, and, even if you don't want to speak tonight, that's alright, alright with me... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
a wonderful read, absolutely honest in every way. "If you live to be a hundred, I want to live to be a hundred minus one day, so I never have to live without you." Winnie the Pooh |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Ethome~ thanks for taking the time to read and respond. means a lot to me. also thank you for your kind words. you are very sweet. take care kind poet. Kris~ Yes that is true what goes around comes around...which means you will be rewarded a million times over my friend. Thanks for your kind words and for always believing in me. You know me much better than most. Take care Irish Rose~ Thanks for the "wonderful" and honest is what I was going for and trying to convey. Glad you liked this. Take care all, and as always thanks much for reading and responding. Love ~amy~ ~A true friend is one soul in two bodies~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Amy...you are precious. wonderful poem....with heartmoving lines. yep couldn't hold my eyes dry. knowing how it feels to lost a mom or dad thanks for sharing ((warm hugs)) Charisma |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Deeply touching work, Amy...I say that about both pieces. You have a beautiful heart. |
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