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Aimster
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0 posted 2000-12-15 11:01 PM


You heard the painful news today
As our eyes connected across the room
All at once like lighting had hit
I all too suddenly knew


The tears streamed down your face
As I slowly reached out my hand
Trying as hard as I could
To convey that I truly understand

You pushed me away in anger
But I am not mad at you
I only wish I could have said more
That there was more that I could do

Your dad is with my mom now
As she hugs him with wings of gold
Just as I'll be there to hold you
Whenever you shall get tired and cold

When my mom died
It was like the wind was knocked out of me
And I thought the pain and anger I felt
Would last an eternity

But I promise you that in time
The pain begins to slowly ease
And they are always here with us
Their presence will never cease

If ever you need a friend
Or just someone to talk to
Do not hesitate to call on me
I'll be a friend that's forever true
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
*a verse i wrote shortly after my mom died
that's never been posted*

there's a stairway to heaven
it's paved of the finest gold
the love that radiates from that special place
will keep you warm even in the harshest cold

that stairway to heaven
can be seen by even those blind
and the trail can be traveled
from the tears cried by those left behind

that stairway heaven
connects them to us
until we can see them again
they are loved and taken care of by the Lord above

amys note: written for a special friend of
mine. she lost her father today while we
were at work.

~amy m. kennedy~



[This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 12-15-2000).]

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1 posted 2000-12-15 11:03 PM


Amy, your beautiful heart is in every word here..this is beautiful work
CocoBaci
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2 posted 2000-12-15 11:28 PM



Amy, what a beautiful poem and I thank you for sharing of your loving heart...

Hugs2uPoetFriend
coco

Kit McCallum
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3 posted 2000-12-15 11:41 PM


Both poems are so touching and beautiful Amy. You are a wonderful and understanding friend who knows too well, the sorrow of this loss ... I'm so sorry for this sadness. Hugs to you both ...

Best wishes,
/Kit

Janet Marie
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4 posted 2000-12-16 12:31 PM


there's a stairway to heaven
it's paved of the finest gold
the love that radiates from that special place
will keep you warm even in the harshest cold

that stairway to heaven
can be seen by even those blind
and the trail can be traveled
from the tears cried by those left behind
================

beautiful sunshine ...
and she is lucky to have you in this time ...
very touching writing
love ya girlie
jan

Some people find subtlety in strangers
if you find anything~let me in
Your eyes~you see everything
my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know

inot2B
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5 posted 2000-12-16 01:45 AM


You Amy your heart is very big. I'm glad your friend has you there with her.
JamesMichael
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6 posted 2000-12-16 05:21 AM


Very nice Amy...James
Marsha
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7 posted 2000-12-16 06:15 AM


Amy, Oh love this is so beautiful, and so softly tender, written with your heart of gold.
Both of these poems are truly marvellous, and I love them. You are right time does heal, makes the edges less cutting and the pain less sharp. The pain and the loss don't ever depart they just stay in a sore spot in your heart.
Look to the light love, and if you need me then you know where I am. Just send me an E and I'll send you back a smile and a hug
Take care
                 Mushy
                    


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



Aimster
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8 posted 2000-12-17 02:08 AM


Bal~
thanks for your lovely reply. whenever
you respond to my work you always leave
me with a huge smile  

Coco~
thanks for reading, and you're welcome.
thank you for sharing yours as well. take
care!

Kit~
a response from you is like an extra
rainbow to my day. thank you, for your
understanding and also for being able
to relate to me.

Janet~
thanks a million my dear friend. am glad
to be your "sunshine girl" any time of
the day or week. i am lucky to have her
as well. love ya  

inot2b~
awwww thanks for that sweet compliment!
you are pretty special yourself. thanks
also for taking the time to read and
respond.

James~
thanks for the very nice  take care.

Marsha~
thanks as always for your lovely reply
to my work. as always you make me smile.
for that i thank you very much! and also
always remember if ever you need me i am
here for you as well. i'll email ya later
take care  

thank you all for taking the time to
read this!
love,
amy



~A true friend is one soul in two bodies~


ethome
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9 posted 2000-12-17 02:15 AM


Amy you have a very kind and beautiful heart I really appreciated the way you were thinking when you wrote this....take care... ethome
snowpants
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10 posted 2000-12-17 05:17 AM


'If ever you need a friend
Or just someone to talk to
Do not hesitate to call on me
I'll be a friend that's forever true'

Aim, this is a perfect mirror image of your heart, and I can say that because I know.  You truly are a great friend, and, what goes around comes around, remember?
Excellent work, m'friend!

-e  ~~~~~~~


'cause I am hanging on every word you say, and, even if you don't want to speak tonight, that's alright, alright with me...

Irish Rose
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11 posted 2000-12-17 09:20 AM


a wonderful read, absolutely honest in every way.

"If you live to be a hundred, I want to live to be a hundred minus one day,
so I never have to live without you."

Winnie the Pooh



Aimster
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Charlotte, NC
12 posted 2000-12-17 07:34 PM


Ethome~
thanks for taking the time to read
and respond. means a lot to me. also
thank you for your kind words. you are
very sweet. take care kind poet.

Kris~
Yes that is true what goes around
comes around...which means you will
be rewarded a million times over my
friend. Thanks for your kind words and
for always believing in me. You know me
much better than most. Take care

Irish Rose~
Thanks for the "wonderful" and honest is
what I was going for and trying to convey.
Glad you liked this.

Take care all, and as always thanks much
for reading and responding.

Love
~amy~

~A true friend is one soul in two bodies~


Charisma
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13 posted 2000-12-17 07:42 PM


Amy...you are precious.

wonderful poem....with heartmoving lines.
yep couldn't hold my eyes dry.
knowing how it feels to lost a mom or dad

thanks for sharing
((warm hugs))
Charisma

Elizabeth
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14 posted 2000-12-17 08:56 PM


Deeply touching work, Amy...I say that about both pieces. You have a beautiful heart.
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