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On Such A Night As This
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On Such A Night As This |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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On Such A Night As This Evening slowly fades into dark night and the stars come out to shine Each star sparkles light turning the night into something so very fine A night for lovers everywhere a night in which to sit and quietly share Such a night beguiles me and love seems not only true but also fair Starlight is such a magical mystical sight, clothes love in softest light With the moon casting her silver gleam this becomes the magic night A night when Love comes dancing through the lovers special dreams When Love herself will show lovers all her plans and strange schemes Such a night as this Romeo found his Juliet waiting for his tender kiss On such a night Love herself knows that true lovers will seldom miss The air itself seems to breathe in a hushed and whispered loves song Love knows that those without her heart won't have to wait very long These nights that Love calls her own are far between and so very few Nights that caress the soul and paints the heart with loves rainbow hue The stars that shine on these nights are seen to cast an enchanted glow Which weaves it's way making hearts feel Loves plans for their show Touches feel so special and hold a magic feel on such a night like this And when lips meet there is such wonder and delight in this nights kiss Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Marsha what a beautiful flowing romantic poem about a magical night... I think this is one of your best yet...the rhyme scheme is so well done....very very good...take care.... ethome |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Marsha, I must agree with E-babes... this is one of your best... the imagery and rhyme are wonderful the whole poems conception is well written out and defined ... "These nights that Love calls her own are far between and so very few Nights that caress the soul and paints the heart with loves rainbow hue The stars that shine on these nights are seen to cast an enchanted glow Which weaves it's way making hearts feel Loves plans for their show Touches feel so special and hold a magic feel on such a night like this And when lips meet there is such wonder and delight in this nights kiss" enchanting and graceful... just beautiful take care jm |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Ethome, hi you again, my visits today have been a kind of hit and run affair. Not because I don't want to spend my time here, but I've had stuff that I really couldn't leave any longer. Well I could but the team will want some pay, admittedly it's not a fortune, but we will still need it. So since this is now my time, I can soothe my soul. Thanks for the compliments, and I'm pleased you like it. (So the poetry fairy is obviously helping me out then. In that case I'll get the go faster stripes for her wings.) Take care Mushy  Janet Marie, you do? I'm sure I don't deserve the praise, I don't even think it took that long. I know I shouldn't measure worth by effort, but I must admit I do. Anyway thank you, I do appreciate it, I really sincerely do. Take care Mushy Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
....*sigh* youre such a romantic bubbles....  lolkeep writin bubbly one!  hugs, dg "so lift your heart with mine...the depth to which it grieves is the height to which it can celebrate!" -Lisa Hussey |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Dee, yes love I can't deny it, I am. Thanks love, you know I really mean it too. Take care Bubbles On such a night as this Dee dreams can come true.  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Beverley Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 97England |
Found this lost in cobwebs and have sent it back. B |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Thank you muchly  Take care Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
marsha~ my friend, this is beautiful!! the images you have penned here are absolutely stunning and full of your loving heart! really loved this a lot...going in my libary for sure. take care. ~amy~ |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Gee what a wonderful picture you paint with your words. i would love to spend a life time of such nights. Great work. Richard |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Amy love, thank you, I actually like this one of mine. I'm honoured that you would wish to keep it, I truly am. I value your and Laura's friendship too, and I know you will be fine. Take care sweetie Mushy Maxtec1, thank you so much, and welcome to Passions, I know you will find your home here. Take care Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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