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Uh Yes My Love
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Uh Yes My Love |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Oh Yes My Love By Richard Maxfield 10-6-2000 Oh yes my love We shall dance Pass through time In romance Take my hand Take my heart Take it all Not just part Hold it close Hold it dear Whisper I love you In your ear Come with me To mountains high Together We shall fly Find your place Deep in my arms Forever safe From life’s harms May I trace Your sweet lips With my soft Finger tips As we spin To new sunrise Our love is true Speaks no lies Press your lips Kiss me my dear That I feel your love So warm and near |
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SwEeTnSeXy18 Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 247nc |
Maxtec1: This poem is very visual. I liked it and feel whoever does go with you and love you will be lucky.  Good Job! Love poems make me smile usally. Take care.~Lisa~ ~in order to gain, you have to lose~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Um? Best offer I've had all day!!! Oh. Okay, 'twas a poem, not an invitation... Still a sweet write, and I enjoyed it much! Thank you kindly, m'new-found poet friend. Keep 'em coming! Ya make me smile. |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Thank you both for your comment. serenity Well my dear friends first then we shall go from there. LOl just teasig you back. Love and light, Richard |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
You know......this is romantic.....beautiful....and makes me want to slow dance........uuummmmmmmm......  -SEA |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Welcome to passions!!!!like this |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Absolutely beautiful, Richard! Definitely a love I wouldn't mind having! Great write. sp I won't go; I won't sleep; I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Richard, now if only I wasn't busy.... No I'll be good I promise  Wonderful I really love this one, it sounds just my kind of poem, visual, tactile and ...... very interesting. Mmmmmm Really great work from you love Take care kid Mushy Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
ah ..richard..you romantic heart... very nice work ..as usual hugs, g "people who need people are the luckiest people..." barbra s. |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Aw..How sweetly romantic..I always know before I even get started reading that I am gonna be breathless when finished..~sigh~..you do this so well... ~LL~The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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SwEeTnSeXy18 Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 247nc |
Maxtec1: Your welcome for my comment. Im sure you have plenty more just as good if not better waiting to become a part of Passions. Once again great poem. Take care. ~Lisa~ ~in order to gain, you have to lose~ |
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