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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
turned away by men, received by sheep and cattle - babe in a manger. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
In a few lines, you've said a lot. |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
that is the point  Thanks ELizabeth. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love these lines, simple in beauty, straith to the point. Charisma |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
thank you very much Charisma |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
well, i wonder why this "babe" is turned away from man...made me think for a moment |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Such a powreful and true message in just a few little words. Well Done Beki ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Very pointed piece, Beki! The reason for the season. |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
thanks everyone, glad it touched you |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Beki--Wonderful haiku. |
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