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my broken road
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my broken road |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road 
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Sailing holding the night black tight Whispering without being heard to myself Everything's okay As I sail away Dark hills are brothers to sleep this night in the Highlands so purple so deep dark loving kissing night Hear me, we'll fly to a bright blue island lying in the sun caressing our skin we lie speechless in ecstasy breathing our life easy drained in the waking dawn grey peeking through lace layer on layer of grey somehow heals the soul of striving And flight so textured faster flies the flight above fluffy clouds i feel you by me we travel to Africa this time to turquoise skies beaches of white silk and nights by the stars so close silky limbs entwine dreams of eternity we sleep cocooned by the sound of palms and back to skies so blasted by rain shatters a tin roof smells of sawdust rise real people are somewhere near real people In the morning of us so long ago i remember a time of just being a road just was no modern thought just a straw drifted down my broken road [This message has been edited by allan (edited 12-15-2000).] |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Very good writing. I enjoyed the read. Love and light, Richard |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Allan, What a wonderful journey you have taken us on. Thank you for sharing.  LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
Thank you both - made my night.... |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
beautifully written poem. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* Allan, this is so very beautiful. I loved it. *sigh* such a romantic trip it was. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
Thank you everyone. |
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