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Crystal Tears |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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Crystal Tears Karen Torbiak 2000 Crystal tears, a million fell each cutting to shreds the heart as they fell like grains of sand cried from a broken souls heart One tear for each word, a lie that had been counted precious as love spun on fantasy as visions seen were precious A tear for each connection two made one in desire knowing heart and soul of each love's flame became desire A tear for each night she slept and dreamed the chance to see him reaching out in spirit quest to touch his heart, to love him Crystal tears that fall from eyes still hurt with remembrance of one loved from the far past but close in remembrance http://www.geocities.com/karenltorbiak/index.html |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
lovely everything..lovely words..lovely website and lovely pic ha..  ~Victoria~< !signature--> A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 12-15-2000).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Startime, Enjoyed the weave of your poem. Looking for more. |
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Ramses Junior Member
since 2000-12-14
Posts 40Porsgrunn, Telemark, Norway |
Startime... Beautiful and still so sad...Love really can hurt sometimes... -Ramses- |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Crystal tears falling as I read.. How beautifully you write about our pain, and the love that stays even after the loved one has gone. Take care. Sandra |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
crystal tears, contain it all. wonderful penned.... ((hugs)) Charisma |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Some tears can comfort, but some just injure the soul even more. This is a beautiful piece. Thanks for posting. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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