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She Cries
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angel girl Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 322within a whisper... |
SHE CRIES Forced to be something she is not, She cries when she's sad, Afraid to be caught. Can't let them see the tears within, For once they start They will not end. As she waits she slowly dies. Her tears are supressed, But inside she cries. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
That could just about eat someone up inside if they can't get the release they need ... well done!! a lot said in a few lines.. take care......ethome |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
The reflection that I see in here brings back so many emotions...It's clear the emotion and the pain that you used to write this with...Excellent writing and may poetry bring you healing if this poem is written for your own unshed tears~ You cannot dance in the sun until you have cried in the rain~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Go ahead a cry...cry all the tears you like...cry all the tears you must...release the hurt and the pain...feel the pain and feel the release...I do and it works...believe me...James |
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