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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2000-12-15 10:46 AM

Mourning Ice

Sparkling Icicles
Mirroring my life, dropping
Too heavy their load...

I've traveled my wish, in my mind sitting still
Approaching the dreams, climbing that hill
Majestic, the spirits that rise come each morn
A new day of promise, each sunshine that's born.
In myst sprays the light, spreads throughout, relieves pain
Of a heart bearing gifts, to be shared once again.
Lifting the shroud, of a gray residue
Of cold nighttimes, turning to warmth, loving you.
Is it "wonder" of this time of year, shedding tears
Or the journey ahead, ending pasts, and all fears?
Is it wanting the presence, the gifts of just one?
Will a new year be fruitful, when the old one is done?

Time keeps on ticking, with moments of blue
With eyes of mine watching, in colorless hue
As hands placed upon me, move forward in time
Rising each evening, these challenges new, mine...
Internally rhyming, my heart sings to you
Sweet sounds that can melt all the icicles of blue.
Flirting the thoughts, always trembling in kiss
Reigning "till next ..." all the feelings I miss
As my heart pulses strong, and the tattoo then traced
Outlining the pale of initials once placed
Fading to never, yet treasured in find
Always, these memories, now press you to mind.

Sparkling Icicles
Mirroring my life, warming
Lightening my load...

~Wynter Bliss

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2000-12-15 11:08 AM

"Time keeps on ticking, with moments of blue
With eyes of mine watching, in colorless hue"

Stunning........

-SEA

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2000-12-15 11:25 AM

thank you Sea

your tide always turns my day...*s

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

3 posted 2000-12-15 11:30 AM

*sigh* how very incredibly beautiful. You have such a wonderful talent for giving the vision life. Much love to you from me.
http://www.geocities.com/karenltorbiak/index.html

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2000-12-15 12:15 PM

This is gorgeous, I have to go back and read it again right now!
Sandra

Dream as if you'll live forever; Live as if you'll die today.
— James Dean

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2000-12-15 12:19 PM

Wynter, lovely...images to fit the words that fit the image...

well done...poetry in motion all the way through...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2000-12-15 01:30 PM

Startime..a very beautiful website you have...I have one too, not quite as spectacular as yours..and I haven't touched it in months...*s..thank you for stopping by and leaving your touch...huggz and happy holidays

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

7 posted 2000-12-15 03:52 PM

lovely hon..and a beautiful pic too..enjoyed

~Victoria~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

8 posted 2000-12-15 05:36 PM

Thank you Cat...I hope you enjoy it more than once...sometimes it takes me several times to read and understand my own poetry

huggzz

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

9 posted 2000-12-16 12:01 PM

Karilea- thank you for stopping by, glad you enjoyed it *s

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

10 posted 2000-12-16 08:08 AM

Victoria..glad you liked the picture..sometimes I can capture a nice one...*s

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

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