Open Poetry #11 |
Cinnamon Anemone 1 and 2 |
VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Cinnamon Anenome Virginia Salter cinnamon anemone sittin’ on a rock beside the sea wavin’ its tentacles lurin’ in prey hasn’t much to say hermit crab comes strollin’ ‘round thinkin’ of treasures he has found tosses up shrimp one claw at a time “Hello, Cin, ol’ friend o’ mine here’s a bit of food for you let me know when you get through though I’m a hermit I like you, Friend. You don’t ask questions ‘bout the time I spend ‘n’ since I’m a hermit it works out well to drop on by ‘n’ sit a spell © October 16, 2000 Cinnamon Anemone, 2 Virginia Salter Cinnamon anemone has a natural enemy to decimate his family eating with great gluttony is the Tompot Blenny, Parablennius gattorugine, wanting his realm quite empty of any kind anemone. Now if you had an enemy that could eat so voraciously what would be your victory over such a travesty of being eaten ravenously by such an animal entity as a Tompot Blenny? © October 17, 2000 |
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Masked Intruder
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Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
You lost me on all those big words. I'm gonna have to look all them up in an encyclopedia or something. gosh... Hehe, but anyways, I really got a kick out of both one and two. Grand gesture |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Hehe, I think this should be read aloud in a very proper, British tongue. The bigger words are just the scientfic names of the enemy of the anemone. Glad you enjoyed, I certainly had fun writing them. I was trying to make a tongue twister both times but think the 2nd was more successful in that. Virginia |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
VAS, Very interesting. I loved your superb work of vocabulary in this one! Elise |
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