Open Poetry #11 |
Passions Gallery--Haleyja (the singer, the words) |
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
He writes his songs from a tender, open heart In a quiet voice, singing sweet and clear You can see the love in each and every part As he sings to the one he holds most dear Opening the book, he begins to write Heartfelt words flowing freely from his pen Telling of moments spent by candlelight Making the love of the now seem like then The words begin to take shape and form Coming together in a tender whole Words that could make even the coldest heart warm They are words of life and of his soul He puts down his pen, now the tale is done Ready to be sung to her, bright as sun ----------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sven, as you close in on your goal, you continue to surprise us with your insights...and this is Parker certainly... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Opening the book, he begins to write Heartfelt words flowing freely from his pen Telling of moments spent by candlelight Making the love of the now seem like then ============== yes...this is p-man alright...poet of heartstrings ... well done tribute to one of our fav and best romantic swoon makers I always tell him he belongs on a pedestal and now he has one great work Sven jm |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
very nice write sven i must say, its hard not to keep a soft spot in my heart for such named flirt... teehee... hugs, g "people who need people are the luckiest people..." barbra s. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sven again you have taken us on a journey that ends with us knowing a poet little better...Parker is such a romantic and you touched that perfectly |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I really appreciate this one too Sven... I love the way Parker writes.... I don't know how he gets that down home twist to come out so classy and unique... but he does.. wonderful job here Sven ... you do him and yourself proud!! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Sunshine, thank you for seeing him in my words. . . Jan, I tried not to put him on TOO big of a pedestal. . . he might get a big head! Thank you. . . dg, I know that. . . which is why it's here. . . Paula, indeed he is one of our most talented Knights. . . he knows the way to the heart. . .thank you my friend. . . ethome, I think that he keeps it in bottles on a shelf!! Maybe if you ask really nice. . . thank you my friend. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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