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BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09
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0 posted 2000-12-14 03:03 PM



~ Inspiration Met Vision~

The dance had begun
the flame within became a dream
seeping in, filling empty parts of the heart
drowning in secret vows, nearly swept away
carried to a mysterious place
a lovers chase to take, to hold
in this majestic dance of chance
veiled in reflections of passion in sultry eyes
seeing this prelude to love, inspiration blooms
vision imparts to your knowing heart
revealing thoughts and captured words
loosening it's hold...
the pen soon flows


BloomingRose


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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2000-12-14 03:07 PM


BloomingRose,
Inspiration and vision well done.

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
2 posted 2000-12-14 03:34 PM


The pen flows in the color of red
As the heart spills forth it's love
Taking a journey where beauty is bred
Resting it's ink on the heavens above

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This was lovely my friend and I hope you didn't mind the little verse.  Sort of leaped out of me.  

A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses.
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BloomingRose
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3 posted 2000-12-14 06:24 PM


Sey~ Thank you  

Mark~ Thank you. I love the verse you wrote.

Ramses
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4 posted 2000-12-14 06:39 PM


Blooming Rose

Beauti with such depth is hard to come by, but you just gave me that kind of beauty. I thank you for it...

-Ramses-

Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2000-12-14 07:33 PM


BloomingRose~
And such a lovely dance it was.
I enjoyed this.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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jwesley
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6 posted 2000-12-14 08:10 PM


Hey, my friend, I REALLY like this. Well done!

jwesley

Janet Marie
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7 posted 2000-12-14 11:15 PM


drowning in secret vows, nearly swept away
carried to a mysterious place
a lovers chase to take, to hold
in this majestic dance of chance
veiled in reflections of passion in sultry eyes
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very cool poem Deb...
written with mystic whispered essence to it
very well written
nice to see you posting again  
take care
jm

Some people find subtlety in strangers
if you find anything~let me in
Your eyes~you see everything
my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know

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