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Inspiration Met Vision |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida 
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~ Inspiration Met Vision~ The dance had begun the flame within became a dream seeping in, filling empty parts of the heart drowning in secret vows, nearly swept away carried to a mysterious place a lovers chase to take, to hold in this majestic dance of chance veiled in reflections of passion in sultry eyes seeing this prelude to love, inspiration blooms vision imparts to your knowing heart revealing thoughts and captured words loosening it's hold... the pen soon flows BloomingRose |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
BloomingRose, Inspiration and vision well done. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
The pen flows in the color of red As the heart spills forth it's love Taking a journey where beauty is bred Resting it's ink on the heavens above ================= This was lovely my friend and I hope you didn't mind the little verse. Sort of leaped out of me. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Sey~ Thank you  Mark~ Thank you. I love the verse you wrote. |
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Ramses Junior Member
since 2000-12-14
Posts 40Porsgrunn, Telemark, Norway |
Blooming Rose Beauti with such depth is hard to come by, but you just gave me that kind of beauty. I thank you for it... -Ramses- |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BloomingRose~ And such a lovely dance it was. I enjoyed this. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Hey, my friend, I REALLY like this. Well done! jwesley |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
drowning in secret vows, nearly swept away carried to a mysterious place a lovers chase to take, to hold in this majestic dance of chance veiled in reflections of passion in sultry eyes ================== very cool poem Deb... written with mystic whispered essence to it very well written nice to see you posting again  take care jm Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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