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Love More Precious Than Gold
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Love More Precious Than Gold |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California 
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Love More Precious Than Gold God summed his angels an announcement was to be made, giving them a task one more precious than that of gold, heavenly choices decided the angels went about their way. To weave the fabric of romance throughout the inhabitants of the land, blessing those deserving a heavenly gift so grand. With much heart felt joy the angels went about their task not missing a single deserving one making sure to the very last. The desire of wanting to love and be loved is planted in the hearts of every man, given free choice to spend it in a way befitting a gift so grand. Not all will do so this God foretold, just the ones with loving hearts and souls made of gold. This gift given so freely is not for everyone just those possessing the demeanor God spoke of, because not all have the ability to love, so choose your soul mate wisely making sure they have a heart made of pure gold. Don’t take love for granted you may find yourself all alone, true love being the rarest of gifts and that more precious than any gold. The angels watch in delight and dance in your behalf in the heavens above this God granted and foretold for he possesses the biggest heart made of pure gold. By, Cerenity Note, For some reason I am not happy with this but can not figure out what is wrong with it and would welcome your comments, thank so much. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) [This message has been edited by Cerenity (edited 12-12-2000).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BRAVO!!!BRAVO!!!Oh my gosh, I can't imagine why you would not be completely happy with this incredible poem. It is wonderful. Thank you so much for sharing. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Cerenity, I see nothing wrong with this piece. In fact, I'm falling all over your words. quote: These lines really hit home with me. I know all to well the damage that's created when one hasn't made the right chioce. So true and wonderfuly said.  ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Cerenity, if you're not happy then you're not happy but I can't imagine why not! This is a well written, smooth and promising piece. Write on Kethry Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant - Thoreau |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Startime,Irie,Kethry Thank you all very much for your kind replys, my mind has been a blank wall for a wial and I can't seem to get in to my work or maybe its feel my writing, and its driving me nuts not having something to write, I think I need Chocolate, Thank you again. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Liked this much!!!!!! |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
I have to agree is beautiful, and shows just how precious a gift love is. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is like much fine gold... I think we worry to much when we can't write...I write sometimes because I almost can't stop myself...if I don't feel it why force myself...a time to go out and enjoy the pleasures of life, relationships, the sun, the ocean, friendships and love as fine as gold...James |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Vandana,Rosebud,James Thank you for your kind replys, this one took along time for some reason to finish, usely I can write it all in just the amount of time it takes me to get it on to paper but if for some reason I stop or loose my thoughts then it goes on to a not finished disc and that disc and others are now getting to me so seens I have not been able to write due to a BIG BLANK WALL in my head I thought I could work on some of these and this is the out come. And James you are right about not forsing it and I do not it does not work for me at all again thank you all. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Cerenity, a beautiful poem, smile and take pleasure in a job well done. Excellent poem. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Cerenity, maybe it's me but i found this to be absolutely beautiful...from the looks of it seems i'm in agreement with others seriously, amazing poem as usual fromyou, but i do know what it's like to be a little dissapointed in your poetry from time to time. i think it happens to us all at one point or another. take care. ~amy~ ~A true friend is one soul in two bodies~ |
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