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Candles in the Night |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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 Candles In the Night twilight beckons, shadows call comes the duskiness over all comes the owl’s swift flight of night uncertainty forms shadows of light but he comes to me in candle bright in deepest shades of dark twilight promises of most awesome measure promises of cherished treasure and after night of sweet recourse comes the morn and slight remorse that through day should we lose touch would he know the love of such as I? and in nosegay of purple white I shall breath in, with deep delight and tuck a sprig into the note which carries love, which was wrote I shall take some sealing wax and white candle brightly lit then melt a bit of sealing wax and slowly drip it bit by bit and I shall seal a love, this forever love and care not yet one whit I shall forsake all others ‘round give myself to him, bit by bit now whom to trust, whom to take this message of my true love’s sake the very love, the one who makes the heart of me take shiver, quake and it shall be the heart of me by one who holds a candle high the one who hears the love of sigh the one who bears the love of real to carry this to one who feels… the love of most, the love of some who knew the greatest love of one and who now holds such a light and takes a candle in the night to shine it in mine eyes Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
but he comes to me in candle bright in deepest shades of dark twilight promises of most awesome measure promises of cherished treasure and after night of sweet recourse comes the morn and slight remorse that through day should we lose touch would he know the love of such ================== by one who holds a candle high the one who hears the love of sigh the one who bears the love of real to carry this to one who feels… the love of most, the love of some who knew the greatest love of one and who now holds such a light and takes a candle in the night to shine it in mine eyes =============== very cool poem Sun... so romantic and mystic ... beautiful reflection of the essense of the flame and all it inspires in us very cool indeed later-drawn to the flame-gator  jm Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
the love of most, the love of some who knew the greatest love of one and who now holds such a light and takes a candle in the night to shine it in mine eyes ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ wonderful promises.....wonderful love....oh my, superb piece...thread to my library. Charisma |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari, this is awesome, a stunning piece by you love, utterly beautiful. Incandescent it glows it shimmers like a rare and precious gift. Thank you for this beauty, this treasure, as always I love it. This is what I mean about your work getting better and better, truly outstanding. Go to the top of the class. (Or the top of the page anyway )Take care Majestic Marsha < !signature-->Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 12-14-2000).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* such beautiful words filled with the perfection of the love that flows so strongly in your heart. I love the way you write of love. You make my heart *sigh* with hope. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea--This feels like old lace glowing in candle light...exquisite writing! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Liked this!!!!!!  |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Visions of romance........love........*sigh* "but he comes to me in candle bright in deepest shades of dark twilight promises of most awesome measure promises of cherished treasure" I love this part!! -SEA |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
So - captivating - So - beautiful So - sensual So - wonderful I felt this as if it had been written for me |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
*sigh*. . . You know that I love this one Sunshine. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
JM, your trademark, marking passages...such a remarkable talent...especially in your synopsis...thank you... Charisma, you may thread me to your library any time, thank you... Incandescent works today Marsha...now, get back to your exuberant self, hey?...thank you... Startime, thank you for giving reasons of love from which to write... Martie, it does have an old lace feel to me, too...thank you for noticing... Thank you Vandana... SEA, take that "part" and incorporate it into one of your own, if you would like to!... Mr. Yeats, just "so-so" hey? I will have to try harder, and by the way, who said it wasn't?...{~,^} Thank you... Sven, you are too easy to please...or...are you? Nah...{~,^}...thank you! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Well, I am NOT easy to please!!!! (but you make it look easy )Love the candles.....and the poem. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ha....no one EVER said you were easy, 'Deer...well now wait a minute, I think one scallawag might have...but let's not say HIS name shall we?...hey, thanks for coming in to read! I appreciate your comments...always... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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