a little nothing...unfolding

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Open Poetry #11

a little nothing...unfolding

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2000-12-14 07:14 AM

felt the drops, the sting of cold
the quiet noise, the empty hold

once more the mind, begins it's doubt
the Wynter winds, to howl without...

two lines for now, to write paired thoughts
no whispers heard, in calmness sought

once was a time, when sweetness reigned
wondering if and why, attained

complaining not, just catching flow
as rivers run, from down below

window watching, pressed to face
refecting lights, in filtered space

awakened now, no "mares" were dreamed
complete surrender, or so it seemed

to eyes, to lips, to touches, all
the rain has softened to myst the wall

tapping out, the heartened beat
of missing words, "till next we meet".....

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

1 posted 2000-12-14 10:19 AM

Wynter, this is one of my favorite styles, and I love the way you worked it.
Wonderful poem.
Sandra

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2000-12-14 11:21 AM

Wynter~
What a lovely grouping of couplets.

My singled out favorite -

'awakened now, no "mares" were dreamed
complete surrender, or so it seemed'

WONDERFUL !
*wink*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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