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Bilal Member
since 2000-12-13
Posts 66 |
~Allah cares~ Lancelot {Bilal} ©2000 Mom loves her child Considers it her pride Dad works for food All day chops wood They love their kins Stop them from sins They expect kids to love Emotions as clean white dove Kids love parents back Love grows in a big stack Allah creates wierd things From micro sperms & eggs Creates a human so complex Different size and sex He loves His own creatures No matter how big or miniatures Expects us to love him back He has all and nothing lack Tests in life are always there God sees just how we bare All the weight and the pain Then results are always gain May be not in life physical But soul is to be all eternal Beleive in religion & trust Allah Perceive it well & read Kalimah Be surprised to see your world Changed, completed, fulfilled & bold ! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hey...I will try anything twice! Back to the top with you...I simply could not let Allah slip slide off of the page! and The Kalimah? Not familiar with that, not yet. But you sure make it sound good! |
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Bilal Member
since 2000-12-13
Posts 66 |
Thanx for responding Serenity. Its very nice of you. Kalimah is kindda religious statement or oath when we enter Islam (the world fastest growing religion). Bilal |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
I enjoyed the thoughts in this poem, enjoyed they way they were expressed, and learned from you, too! What more can anyone ask? Back to the top. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
i once wrote a poem with this line: "love is love is love is love is love" and i truly believe: god is god is god is god is god meaning, no matter what name He reveals himself under, it's still different facets of him he's letting us see... *sigh*... well, that's what i believe but he's not talking to me lately so if you talk to Allah, tell him i'm right here waiting and wondering and if he could say hi, i'd appreciate it... *sighagain*.... put in a good word for me, ok? thanks for the read... it was full of truths - all you can ever really ask out of life is a sincere apology and some decent poetry - |
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Bilal Member
since 2000-12-13
Posts 66 |
Thanx Kcsgrandma and Doreen Peri for responding. Well, if you take one step towards Allah, He'll take ten towards you. All it needs is a little commitment and deep from the heart desire to love Him and be His follower! Trust me He'll never let you down but would surely give you challenges to prove yourself to Him. Bilal |
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