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Marsha
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0 posted 2000-12-13 08:04 PM


Where There Are Dreams

Where in your soul that still belives in hope
It is there that truth uses loves telescope
Inside where love is waiting to grow
There is that special warm glow
There are the dreams that shine with light
The dreams that fill up your lovers night

There within your heart love will hear its call
In that place where truth is, love is its all
Within that place there exists no real hate
Where destiny is felt, and knows its fate
There are the dreams that brings souls ease
The dreams that breathe and offer peace

In the place where hearts open to a soft touch
Where love is waiting, needing you so much
In a sanctuary that is untouched by greed
Where love on dreams ambrosia doth feed
There are the dreams that touch loves hand
The dreams that love really understand

Where in the night your heart hears the sound
And lovers laughter echoes above and around
Inside that place that no one else can see
Lives a dream of trust that love will be
There are the dreams that offer loves gift
The dreams that gives your heart a lift

Once within the place that hides its own doubt
Where heart and love forget what life's about
Within that place that has become so blind
Now open your eyes to what you will find
These are the dreams, loves children of the night
The dreams that ask Love to give them her light

Marsha


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


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ParisGrl
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1 posted 2000-12-13 08:47 PM


Marsha

I absolutely love your work!  this is beautiful!  Keep it up.

Take Care,
~Laura~

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2 posted 2000-12-14 06:41 AM


Laura, thank you very muchly, I really appreciate it, and a very merry Christmas to you love. May all your wishes come true  
Take care
                 Mushy Marsha
                      
And if you wondered why everyone now call me Mushy this is why!  


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


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3 posted 2000-12-14 08:16 AM


Marsha, you do have that mushy side, hm? I love this. I know we have to keep the hopes and dreams alive always.
Sandra

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4 posted 2000-12-14 10:11 AM


If I could reside within your poem, it would be heaven! Simply beautiful!
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5 posted 2000-12-14 11:06 AM


Sandra, thank you very muchly love, and I know you do try and you will succeed, I know you will. (There that's hope and dreams for you, and if you fall then we will help you rise once again) Take care kid  
                      

Songbird, thank you, I do really appreciate your reply. And you can live inside it, all it takes is a little bit of faith and hope.

Take care
              Mushy Marsha
                    


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


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6 posted 2000-12-14 11:07 AM


Marsha~ you take my breath away with the beauty of your words!!

"There are the dreams that offer loves gift
The dreams that gives your heart a lift"

I'm sure you knew I'd love this   -SEA

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7 posted 2000-12-14 11:52 AM


I liked it!!!!
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8 posted 2000-12-14 12:00 PM


Well shucks, you glow, girl!

Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
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Marsha
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9 posted 2000-12-14 01:53 PM


Circe, thank you love, I can only hope, that you liked it. This was the result of yesterdays situation so I suppose I should be grateful, although yesterday was one of those nightmare days that seem to come from nowhere. And I don't think I'd wish too many of them in my lifetime, still never mind, it could have been worse. Not a lot worse but still.
So love I thank you, I truly do.  
take care
                 Mushy
                    
Vandana, thank you muchly.
                          
Kari / Persephone
Thank you love, and yes I'm sure my guardian angel was around yesterday, otherwise it would have been me who was plugged in when it went bang. (There is always a bright side, actually no one was, I'd just told everyone to disconnect, my weren't we lucky   )
Take care
               Majestic Marsha
                        



Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


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10 posted 2000-12-14 02:12 PM


Where in the night your heart hears the sound
And lovers laughter echoes above and around
Inside that place that no one else can see
Lives a dream of trust that love will be
There are the dreams that offer loves gift
The dreams that gives your heart a lift

My fav verse...you write so beautifully...~Sigh~...This one goes to the library along with many more of yours...
~LL~



The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown

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11 posted 2000-12-14 02:35 PM


oh marsha......this was soooooooooooo heavenly......love it.....truly love this lovely penned piece.

((hugs))
charisma

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12 posted 2000-12-14 03:02 PM


I believe love is built upon hope...James
Marsha
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13 posted 2000-12-15 08:01 AM


Lady Lightning, thank you so much, I'm really pleased you like it. The other poets here give so much inspiration and love that anyone can't help but grow. I'm just a little shoot, but I'm hoping to be a real flower one day.  
Thank you again
                
Charisma, thank you love, I do so enjoy seeing your name on my posts. Take care love
                     
James, thank you so much. And it is love it is built on hope.

Take care
              Mushy Marsha
                    


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


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