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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
Anger She says she is stupid and she thinks too much with her heart Little does she know she captured mine right from the start Last night she found out something she did not want to know She became angry, frustrated and let it show Her heart has been broken but I am her glue Her love unwaivered and true [This message has been edited by ParisGrl (edited 12-13-2000).] |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Beautiful words. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Hey Laura! This is absolutely beautiful, and I know someone else who is really going to love it, too! sp  'cause I am hanging on every word you say, and, even if you don't want to speak tonight, that's alright, alright with me... |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
Elizabeth, i'm glad you liked it. Kris, Hey girl! what's up? I hope she likes it. Thanks for reading.  )~Laura~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Laura, this is brilliant, and I'm sure she will adore it, as she adores its author. Absolutely fabulous, I love it, it is utterly wonderful. take care Mushy Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
Marsha, I'm glad that you enjoyed it. I hope she adores me as much as i adore her. Take Care ~Laura~ |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
laura~ wow! this was excellent hon...conveyed what happened last night quite well. that's all i will say here regarding this. wonderful poem! love, me |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
she must be blessed to have a friend like you whom she is not afraid to share her anger.... short and concise..just the way i like it |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Love will always answer the call to calm down the anger and I know that the love you share will be up to the challenge. She is way to special not to hear and feel your love. Wonderful read. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
it's always been that love will heal. . . and this is no different. . . wonderful. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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