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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Somewhere in the interim between planning and touching, between loving and hating, appeared indifference. Frightful lack of care compounded by insane desire, emeshed responsibilities, paranoid fears and loss of self, culminated into one long painful goodbye. And still I cry... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"culminated into one long painful goodbye. And still I cry.." Listening with my heart here..........  -SEA |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
It breaks my heart to know that "still you cry...." You know I'm with you always, and feel the same pain you do. Elise |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
ENJOYED IT!!!!!!! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Oh..such feeling! Very good Sandra. I hope the tears dry soon and are replaced with smiles. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Sandra, those tears will disappear soon my friend, but for now just let them cleanse your heart a little but DON'T doubt your beauty and your heart as you will once again shine. Hugs to you my friend. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
sandra, I am sorry to hear that your heart is in pain, I hope that it mends soon. Huge hug, powerfully written poem. take care. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
powerful words from you my friend. . . they will end soon. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
CATALINA, my compliments to you for this write... Your poem seemed to just reach out to me and surface some buried feelings... Thank you for sharing coco |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sandra, Oh love, I know I really do. Hugs to you sweetie, this is a brilliant piece, you are an amazing woman. And you deserve to be happy. Take care Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Sandra, powerful words, and I hope that you find the love that your heart truly deserves. take care, huge hug. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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