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Chanson
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Up Creek w/Out Paddle

0 posted 2000-12-13 01:15 PM


Curling petals
pillowed between pages,
imprinted on parchment
painted thymely and
faintly of sage,
contained within ageless
memories

returning to mornings
beneath breath's unhurried
billow, curved lip edges,
dawning anew

the stalling dance
thigh deep in meadow's
shuffle, sighs ruffling
bare ankle, bringing rise
to the sun, the budding
of roses.


...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
---Song of Gesture



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Victoria
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1 posted 2000-12-13 01:20 PM


lovely chanson..beautiful images here..

                    ~Victoria~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


Chanson
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Up Creek w/Out Paddle
2 posted 2000-12-13 01:26 PM


Thank you, Victoria....glad you enjoyed.
Best wishes to you this Holiday season  

Hugs~

...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
---Song of Gesture



vandana
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3 posted 2000-12-13 06:00 PM


like this much!!!!
Chanson
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Up Creek w/Out Paddle
4 posted 2000-12-13 08:19 PM


I'm pleased you did. Thank you Vandana  

...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
---Song of Gesture



Wilfred Yeats
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Wilmington, Delaware
5 posted 2000-12-13 08:31 PM


a beautiful picture - missed seeing your work - glad you're back ~S~
Irish Rose
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6 posted 2000-12-13 08:39 PM


I'm glad to see you back also, I enjoyed this very much!

"If you live to be a hundred, I want to live to be a hundred minus one day,
so I never have to live without you."

Winnie the Pooh


Mike
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7 posted 2000-12-13 08:52 PM


Very nicely written. Enjoyed muchly.
Chanson
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Up Creek w/Out Paddle
8 posted 2000-12-13 09:06 PM


Wil, Irish Rose, Mike--

Thank you very much, for the kind words,
the welcome back, the encouragement  

Hugs~

...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
---Song of Gesture



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