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Winter Solstice
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Winter Solstice |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii 
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 delicate wind chimes lonely wind in agony blowing wood smoke dusk chanting in rhythmic cadence desiring to be heard dust on the toes of my boots powdered sugar prints leading to the back porch steps cold November moon barn owl doesn’t give a hoot vesper star shines bright silent waterfall glistens snow flurries embrace the night wrapped in arms of love snuggled warm under down quilt melted by your eyes © 2000 Koko Stewart Koomoa (All rights reserved) Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Koko, Beautiful images with a nice progression and pleasing conclusion. I liked this a lot! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful!!! This is the only way I want to see snow.  |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
loved the images..and a beautiful picture too..  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
Thank you so very much. i lived in snow a long time and this wasmy reality, but now i agrre ...it's nicer to remeber and write about in the warmthof a Hawaiian winter. ...smiles. I appreciate all your emarks and taking the time to read my poems. mahalo Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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