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KokoStewartKoomoa
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since 2000-12-04
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Waikiki, Hawaii

0 posted 2000-12-13 12:05 PM




delicate wind chimes
lonely wind in agony
blowing wood smoke dusk
chanting in rhythmic cadence
desiring to be heard

dust on the toes of my boots
powdered sugar prints
leading to the back porch steps

cold November moon
barn owl doesn’t give a hoot
vesper star shines bright
silent waterfall glistens
snow flurries embrace the night

wrapped in arms of love
snuggled warm under down quilt
melted by your eyes


© 2000 Koko Stewart Koomoa (All rights reserved)




Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



© Copyright 2000 Cheryl Stewart Koomoa - All Rights Reserved
Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
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Michigan, U.S.A.
1 posted 2000-12-13 12:19 PM


Koko,
  Beautiful images with a nice progression and pleasing conclusion. I liked this a lot!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has passed
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)


Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
2 posted 2000-12-13 02:06 PM


Beautiful!!! This is the only way I want to see snow.    
Victoria
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3 posted 2000-12-13 02:25 PM


loved the images..and a beautiful picture too..

                 ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


KokoStewartKoomoa
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since 2000-12-04
Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii
4 posted 2000-12-13 10:31 PM


Thank you so very much. i lived in snow a long time and this wasmy reality, but now i agrre ...it's nicer to remeber and write about in the warmthof a Hawaiian winter. ...smiles.
I appreciate all your emarks and taking the time to read my poems.
mahalo


Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



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