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PoemCrazy
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since 2000-11-30

Posts 159

0 posted 2000-12-13 11:28 AM

Dance With Me

Dance with me,
and i'll take you where the music hides.
Beyond here, beyond there,
to a place you never knew you had inside.
First, pick the music,
something with a beat - lend its heart to your feet.
Make your hips the melody,
can you feel it? Isn't it neat?
Shy? Close your eyes so no one's watching.
Everyone can dance.
Give a name to each note and get lost in them,
music is life, take the chance.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2000-12-13 11:30 AM

OH YES!! I love this!! Music and dancing......very nice

-SEA

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

2 posted 2000-12-13 02:27 PM

Nice poem!!!!

Lady Lightning
Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 422
Kentucky

3 posted 2000-12-14 02:29 AM

Liked this much....

~LL~

The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown

Verve
Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 348
Singapore

4 posted 2000-12-14 02:33 AM

I am lost in the music already ...
=)

Good job!

~verve

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

5 posted 2000-12-15 06:32 PM

Hi PoemCrazy,

I like this it makes you want to dance, but those old gal just really can't dance, loved your poem and welcome to passions.

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

6 posted 2000-12-15 06:45 PM

*sigh* I flowed into the words of your poem and totally enjoyed them. Much love to you from me.
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Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

7 posted 2000-12-15 07:12 PM

oh how I love to dance
every time when music play
I always sway in trance
soaring on heavens way
twirling around
shaking my hips with grace
on rythme sound
feeling like the old day's
yes I love to dance with you
dancing is what I love to do.

love your poem....

Charisma

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

8 posted 2000-12-15 10:37 PM

really enjoyed this. music and
poetry are my passions! beautiful
poem that really caught my attention.
thanks for posting this wonderful poem.
take care.
~amy~

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

9 posted 2001-03-18 09:16 AM

I would like permission to put this in our Newsletter here, please let me know!

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

10 posted 2001-08-04 08:06 PM

And I love your dance

Well expressed!

Melissa~

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