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Awakening (First Senryu)
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Awakening (First Senryu) |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Within a heart waits Anticipation dances Freedom draws a breath to fly To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
this is lovely! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Beautiful. Says a lot with few words. Enjoyed it |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very well done!! |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Love what you've done here  Life has got to chnage, Nothing stays the same, Soon it will be time, For me to move on. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderful dreamkeeper. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
very nicely done....great first attempt |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
*a pat on the shoulder for a job well done* now when can we see your second one?*grinz* |
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DreamSeeker Member
since 2000-11-17
Posts 72 |
First Time I Long For Tender Touches Life Begins As Loves Eyes Open Wide And The Days That They Linger They Are Nothing To You At All Yet You Remain And The Song That Is Soul It Reaches Defiant Giving It In And Give |
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