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Too Big of a Heart |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL 
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Please excuse my rough rhyme. I find it easy to do in the beginning, and difficult to carry throughout the rest of the poem. Perhaps my usual lack of lies within that. Ahh well..There is other reason behind this poem anyway. Make my heart stop loving, please, Its driving me insane. Beat by beat it drowns me out, Such a cruel little game. Holding on Cannot endure, Trapped in silence insecure. Voices wrapped in silent truth, Past collections, Colored proof. |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Hay girl, I know it's gettin' late... If I have another Vodka and orange... we could be up real late and I'm already infused in darkness. I'm going to leave you with a tender hug my dear... that's the best that I can do. Otherwise... Rosemary & They'll, boot me right out of here. dale |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
i'd say this is about 99 proof.... has a nice bite but it goes down smooth... good write temptress... |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Dale, Thanks.  I can always count on you. Hey...that used to be my favorite drink until I moved on to something else, and then eventually gave up drinking. Laters, and thanks for reading. ((hugs back))Local Rebel, Thanks for the compliment, and thanks for reading. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
All I can say, is boy do I know how this feels. And the flow of it is great. I felt it right to the bone. Sandra |
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