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you set my world |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho 
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I got nothin' they say my hearts a hot wire and with my feet on the ground I’m told my minds not so sound my lines have all expired my rhymes have little of inspire but in the dark of burnt out ignoble soul cellar I know there’s a fuse of darkened dreams some of those were on the nights with you we felt around our way to go I couldn’t see the scenes exactly but I remember artful hues and I knew your eyes were green because you told me true but with my fuses blown I wondered if it was just a dream I thought was you and I ain't got a thing to show and with no one seeing who’s who could possible know you set my heart to a musing but right now I’m kind of busy I really need to find a ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ fuse . [This message has been edited by lucky (edited 12-13-2000).] |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Nice poem with a good ending.  |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Dont'cha worry none, darlin', about findin' a fuse! Who needs light at all! You're not going to find one anyway, 'cause I hid 'em 'till next fall! Yepper, your heart's a hot wire, and I felt those sparks when the fuses blew - hey, I like that feelin' around, let's see what we can do! And I know you can tell who's who, my dear, you've a magic musing line - don't stand on the ground, just wrap yourself 'round me, - and that'll do JUST FINE! . [This message has been edited by Rosemary J. Gwaltney (edited 12-13-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lucky~ You is da cat's meow ! Your words reach me somehow. You fill me with amuse ... Now don't go blowing a fuse !  Wattage got into you ?  ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Light a candle for me, Dale...and glow! |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Temptress 01:40 AM Nice poem with a good ending huh..? I saw a couple of your follow ups bubba... That little sky rocket could've been... O.K. bubba, I got a picture, did I see something wrong..? Rosemary J. Gwaltney 02:04 AM So ya don't want me to worry none, darlin', Well why-di-dya hide the fuses..? I won't be asking you for a fuse. Your gonna feel a lot more than sparks when my fuses blow and what'cha gonna do THEN! Marge Tindal 05:22 AM It's dat darn Pink Rosey Cat...Oh sheesh not to say that. I'll send you "E" if she lets me. Martie 07:59 PM Light a candle for me, Dale...and glow! Darn you sis, I've gotten lost for words for a minute. But you got it. Your little Girl Michelle is a JEWEL, and I'd certainly lite more than just one candle for her... and need I say, you....... got those words better than I could possibly express for her. But on the other hand if I don't understand, why don't you wake up your 'ol man and lite him up..! Dale, I hope lucky . [This message has been edited by lucky (edited 12-14-2000).] |
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