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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Fluid – fingers ~melody~ Walking scales ~serenity~ silences seceding sound -sing of string- pronounced, profound… A color—STREAK— On canvas, plain… Never – WILL IT! Remain the same. A sonnet’s song In plaintive plea Reverberates Eternity. Every line That you might pen Strikes – resounds My soul within… All begging for the best in me… Like skipping stones Across still pond I cherish you This silent song. ”Deliver me? I don’t belong.” And only shadows weep with me… I wrap the warmth About me now – “Dream sweet…” I think my silent vow, a prayer to see you in my sleep… He is my love. He is my keep. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Fluid – fingers ~melody~ Walking scales ~serenity~ silences seceding sound -sing of string- pronounced, profound… =================== ”Deliver me? I don’t belong.” And only shadows weep with me… I wrap the warmth About me now – “Dream sweet…” I think my silent vow, a prayer to see you in my sleep… He is my love. He is my keep. ================= my queen of serene ... my oh my this is lovely ... every line was a beautiful whispered promise and the title is so perfect ... sleep sweet me sweet sen. me loves ya me Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This makes me feel at peace. Marvelous!  |
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Masked Intruder
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Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
It's snowing! It's snowing! It's snowing! *GRINS* *GRINS* *GRINS* |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wonderful time alone reflecting!! You captured the singer songwriter's feelings here with this one it would make a good ballad....good show ...Celeste!! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ 'Like skipping stones Across still pond I cherish you This silent song.' Yes ... yes, she said ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
the "never - WILL IT" came across loud and strong.... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
JM...thanks m'twin...and sleep is pretty elusive for me at night...as ya well know! Hugs, and you hang in there! Merry Christmas, lovie... Sharon...good, good, I'm so glad that it sent you some peace...I'm gonna miss you while you're gone, yanno that tho. HUGS Masked...you crazy nut...you know? I've only been able to say that three times in thirty nine years...and I do get excited about (sorry to my snowbound friends...) ethome...hugs (or is it huggles) for the terrific compliment...Celeste thanks you and so do I...grin. Mom? I have the occasional moment...smiles...still working on it! Thanks to you, not just for reading, but for being you and showing so much concern. Hugs to you too... Karilea...thanks for noticing that line...I'm still scratching my head about it though, wasn't quite sure if the intent of irony came across at trying to WILL serenity into a chaotic mind...so I thank you. I feel like we are quite on the same wavelength these days! Hugs to all...I'm going to off to read now! |
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