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Take My Hand
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Take My Hand |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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Take My Hand Karen Torbiak 2000 Take my hand in yours place it on your heart let me feel the beat I will do my part Take my hand with love showing all you care share yourself with me love me if you dare Take my hand so soft love I offer you give to you my heart open to your view Take my hand in yours let me taste your kiss bless me with your love sharing lover's bliss Take my hand in trust offer love to me give us both a chance true love sets us free Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Very nice, just don't be surprised if he wants more than just your hand. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You got your picture out there now and then you write a poem like this and expect the guys to be good...they can't be good they'll want to go right out west and take that hand and find that heart......good writing..... like the rhyme scheme.... very good!! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed it  |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I would expect your doorway to be filled with men clamoring about to be the first one there. Very lovely poem and so little to ask in a true love relationship. Wonderfully penned from your heart. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Words from the fragile heart. I loved it. I hope you have someone who will take your hand.. Much love, Elise |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
inot2B *giggling with delight* I would sure hope that he would want more than my hand. Much love to you from me. Eric Too cute my friend. How I wish that was true. I guess I am ever a dreamer with no love in my reality. Much love, my friend, from me to you. vandana Thank you so much. I am glad you enjoyed it. Much love to you from me. Mark *sigh* not true, my friend. This Star is very much alone in the sky. I am glad you enjoyed this poem. Much love to you from me. athena4 I think I am too much of a romantic. No one in my life. Love has always been only a dream to me. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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rascalx Senior Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 590Florence, SC, USA |
What a beautiful song of love! I am a mushy romantic at heart and I can't think of anything more beautiful than the loving plea you have put to words here. Any man should jump at the chance to take your hand. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
share yourself with me love me if you dare give to you my heart open to your viewve me if you dare ```````````````````````````````````````` A beautiful expression of a loving heart... Thank you for the enjoyable read STAR Coco |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
*sigh* ... Lovely. ~verve |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Oh goody..another one .. I so enjoy reading your words..another keeper... ~LL~The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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