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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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Eternal Love Is Karen Torbiak July 3, 2000 Eternal Love Is soft with gentle feeling a gentle touch to soothe the brow a soft kiss to lips filled with tenderness a gentle word of love to reassure a soft hand placed in yours with trust a gentle look to melt your heart a soft whisper of love against your neck Eternal Love Is filled with fiery passion heart filled with desire and need to touch fiery kiss that takes your breath away body filled with feelings exploding with intensity fiery touch to places known to ignite love’s fire soul filled with want to blend as one fiery bodies joined to set the heavens aflame Eternal Love Is the prayer and wish of God for us praying we endure to find the one to share wishing to share his love with all mankind praying we have eyes to see when they are there wishing we would turn to him in our need praying we hear the words of love given us wishing to tell us his love is unconditional Eternal Love Is this and so much more Love designed that others may see and take hope Love that defeats the evil of this sad world Love that lifts makes better and completes us Love returns light into lives darkened in despair Love shares strength one to another with compassion Love given as a blessing to those whose hearts yearn Eternal Love Is worth any battle to possess that we may come together in God’s eyes returning all gratitude and praise to Him Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is lovely, both the picture and the poem....well done... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
magical comes to mind when I read this, Love is that way, it touches the heart makes them one. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Very beautiful!!!!!! Oh yeah, the poem is lovely too!!!!   Seriously, this was one very beautiful penning by you and I am so glad that I came across it. Love the picture too btw.A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Sunshine Thank you so much. Your comments are always so loving. Much love to you from me. Rosebud1229 Oh thank you for using the word magical. I think love is magical and try to write it that way. Much love to you from me. Mark thank you very much, my friend. I am very glad you enjoyed it. Much love to you from meLove I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Very, very lovely...Eternal Love Is this and so much more Love designed that others may see and take hope Love that defeats the evil of this sad world Love that lifts makes better and completes us Love returns light into lives darkened in despair Love shares strength one to another with compassion Love given as a blessing to those whose hearts yearn... This one is surely a keeper...  ~LL~The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Beautiful, Startime! Corinne |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
All i can say is big sigh. very good writing love and light, Richard |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wonderful Karen!! Just wonderful!!! ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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