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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
She God you must really hate this man I have come to be because the woman I care for doesn't care for me. She is the woman I adore. She is the woman that doesn't like me any more. Could her rejection be a measure of your displeasure? Are you not the God that created man and desired he would not be alone? Are you not the God that created woman to insure neither man nor woman would be alone? Am I expecting too much from the female species? I only ask for just enough attention to sustain me. I don't really require her Love for all eternity. If only my earthly time could be so heavenly blessed so I could live on this earth within her arms and wrapped in happiness. Am I not doing my part? I freely give all the feelings from within my heart. I try to please her in every way. I gave my heart to her and still she wouldn't stay. She never said goodbye. She just went away. Jameslee@December12,2000 [This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 12-12-2000).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Oh James, I'm so sorry sweetheart....... |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* dear one, I am so very sorry for your pain. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Wrong one James, the right one will stay. |
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warmhrt Senior Member
since 1999-12-18
Posts 1563 |
I feel your pain in your words...but, one day, the right woman will stay. Nice work, James. Kris All good poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings...~William Wordsworth |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Sad,,Enjoyed the read!!!!!!!  |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
James~ this was sad and heartfelt. i am sorry you are experiencing such pain right now. but i can assure the right woman will come along and stay or this one will wake up and realize what she has and could lose. take care amy |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
well i hope she doesnt try to compare anyone to you..they will lose..HUGS ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Sea, Startime, inot, Kris, vandana, amy and Victoria for your lovely responses...she called me this morning and offered some explanations...I listened for a while...her words were sweet and soothing...she ask me how I was doing and for some reason I said "alright"..I immediately rephrased that response and honestly told her how I felt...I was acting like a scared rabbit being chased by a bear...wondering how I had failed...she told me I didn't fail at all...she appreciates my friendship...she is simply a very busy woman...I understand for I am the same as she...the journey will continue...better defined and more refined...James |
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