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Me a Romantic.
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Me a Romantic. |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Me a Romantic Of course not what do you think It is only a red rose I am hiding behind my back I only lit the candles for light So I could see your smile From the dark of the night And when I held your hands Kissed your bright red lips My heart's beat gave me away Me a romantic, well only you know Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
I liked the short poetic style, but would have thought a poem of romance more rhyming. Like in the second stanza. It is nice the way it though. Gloom |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
I like this one. Sounds as if you were trying to hide the fact that you can be romantic from someone and then having it forced out of you. KM every day is a new day with which we can change the world |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Daniel, this was very good... loved it. perfect message...  Parker |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* yes yes you are a romantic. This was perfect and got me dreaming. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
DJD~ Right to my heart! Perfect......so ugh...*SIGH*  -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Gloom, Well so sorry to upset your standards. Thanks for the reply. Wesley, Nice to see your comments, made me feel a little better. Cheers Haleya, So very kind of you. Thank you Startime, Your love is appreciated. Thank you for your usual wonderful replies. SEA, You make the day really worth it. Cheers. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Yes, you a Romantic. . . never thought it would happen did you??  Wonderful poem. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Daniel darlin...of course you are HEHEHE.. you never had me fooled for a minute...this is sweetly perfect....HUGS |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Sven, So wonderful, I got found out too soon Paula, What did I say that gave me up, I wonder. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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