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Masked Intruder
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Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets 
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Unfettered dreams in night's slow passing Darkness reigning, shadows massing Stars unfurled in blackened oceans Winking, twinkling in lustrous motion Nocturnal creatures hunt their prey Fearing, loathing the light of day Striped tail, masked face Peer out from behind that darkened space Bright black eyes, humor glinting Watch you all in wonder writing Sharp tooth shimmers in moonbeam's rays Gray furred body no longer stays Retreats he to his dark abode To dream his dreams of thoughts untold "Satan is my motor." - Cake |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
Wow, this was great. I felt like I had a pair of binoculars and was pearing into the forrest. Now, I have to say, and please pardon me if this is wrong it's been a rough day, I'm picturing a raccoon. Good job MI. "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
WOW*sigh* there was spiritual magic in this wonderful poem. More please. Much love to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Fantastic - you can intrude any day oh masked one . Nice poem, I really enjoyed it, your symbolism and descriptive writing is wonderful . Many thanks . L.of.L. Tom . Don't try, do or do not, there is no try . - Master Yoda - |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Very good writing. I enjoyed the read. Love and light, Richard |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thank you for the view through your eyes m'friend...I could hear the rustling of the trees...excellent sir! |
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Masked Intruder
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Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
Saxoness- You hit me right on the nose, raccoons are me favorites. Startime- Did I mention the raccoon is my spirit animal? I'm in a tribe (through a Scout Camp, but close enough) if you couldn't tell by my picture. Tom- You know now that since you gave me your permission, you're never going to get rid of me? Richard- Thanks for the kind words. May you enjoy others just as much. Karen- I miss the trees. All I've got here is ice covered concrete buildings. Thanks for reading. "Satan is my motor." - Cake |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
 BUMP! Need I say more, Masked One? |
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