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Soft Feelings |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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Soft Feelings Karen Torbiak 2000 The fire spreads its warmth throughout the room casting a soft glow that matches the one in my heart Winds howl against the windows rattling in time to unknown music and I feel my heart try to keep pace with love’s vibrations Soft music flows into my limbs carrying me along on it gentle path as my body responds to the caress of sweet love songs Words so softly speaking of romance, fill my mind with yearning to hold the heart of someone writing love poems The fire, the winds, the music, the words all come together this night bringing sighs to my lips and Soft Feelings to my heart Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Karen, That is beautiful. You are just great. "Words so softly speaking of romance, fill my mind with yearning to hold the heart of someone writing love poems" Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Karen I have to agree with Daniel this is beautiful! "Words so softly speaking of romance, fill my mind with yearning to hold the heart of someone writing love poems" I couldn't stand to see this one way at the back with just one comment...it'simply too much heart to keep undiscovered...... ethome |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Karen I have to agree with Daniel this is beautiful! "Words so softly speaking of romance, fill my mind with yearning to hold the heart of someone writing love poems" I couldn't stand to see this one way at the back with just one comment...it'simply too much heart to keep undiscovered...... ethome |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Ooooh..another one for me to shelve..Liked this one much...  ~LL~The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Daniel JD  You always say the nicest things. *grinning* I love it. Much love to you from me.Eric *giggling with delight* I take it you really, really like this one. Hugs, my friend. Much love to you from me. Lady Lightning Thank you so very much, dear one. I love you work too. Much love from me to you. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Startime, sounds like one to read in front of the fireplace...just say "mmmmmmmmmm...." and grin? I couldn't help but add, "soft feeling" feels wonderful...but vice versa? NOT!!! lol with hugs |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Karen, Don't you love feeling that way? The serenity and beauty just overtakes all of your senses, and the melancholy essence lends to you a whole canvas to dream. Beautifully written!! Much love, Elise |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh my, soft feelings spreading some heat I believe, love reading this wonderful penned piece. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes very soft..James |
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