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| Open Poetry #11 |
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Long John Ag - Humor's Leaven |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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He can make you heart soar With words, that touch your soul He can make poetry roar He can comfort, fill and make whole He can bring on heart wrench As he sings songs of romance While you rest aside from love's bench Or join him in the dance He will provide encouragement When rocky is the way He'll share in your contentment Through bright and shining day A steadfast man firm as a rock He give's a taste of heaven In his words you can take stock When spiced with humor's leaven. Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant - Thoreau |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
He really is a prize isn't he!  Enjoyed this, Kethry! "Always be a first rate version of your self instead of a second rate version of someone else." Marilyn Monroe |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very good indeed you have no idea how much I enjoyed reading this!!! |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
What?!!! Only four stanzas?!!!! Thank you Kethry - I am abashed at the adulation. Naturally, I will try to live up this lofty standard. Irish - Yanno, I've got this tingling, Spiderman-like sensation niggling at me concerning your comment about me being a prize. You DO realize (don't you?) that a comment like that can bring out the worst in Balladeer and Toerag? I'm sure it was an innocent compliment. oops - There's that feeling again! ET - You really enjoyed this? oops - There goes that feeling AGAIN! Nan - Is there any way to block Balladeer and Toerag from responding to this wonderful, sensitive, factual poem? *hopeful eyes* |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Hey Kethry... Nice work here.. and LngJhn is indeed a prize...  Tell ya what, LJA... Lorelei and I can be lookouts - We'll watch for those miscreants... If we see one of 'em... we'll divert their attention... We are on a mutual mission to give 'em a big SMOOCH Sandwich, after all... That oughta do it..... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kethry,  This is superb, utterly wonderful, it really and truly is deloghtful. So amazingly true, really excellant work love.  Take care Slushy Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Lorelei54 Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 458 |
Thanks for writing about my man...he was a begging for attention last week, I guess I was not giving him enough... LJA..this isn't your poem..why are you answering comments? Lynne gets the glory, not you! Nan..when we gonna do that sandwich? |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
wonderful tribute Kethry....excellent penned. Charisma |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Thanks everyone, He is special i'nt he. (Special enough to ride in a blue bus with the words "SPASTIC" written gloriously on the side.) Sorry LJA couldn't resist and you know I'm irresistable. Laugh long Kethry Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant - Thoreau |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Yes, Long John, I know! But I try to find the good in everyone, even people who hate cats!! ha ha.... and everytime I see YOUR name I want a donut, you know chocolate covered long-johns we have them at the local bakery..."Long's Bakery" maybe I will write a poem about it for you sometime, would you like that.... besides, I'm in a good mood today, something in the water......I'm sure they will retaliate with a wonderful thread to match this one by Kethry's and we'll all see more of your wonderful qualities. whoo hoo.....(this is the french side of me, sorry everyone, I really am only half-Irish)< !signature--> "Always be a first rate version of your self instead of a second rate version of someone else." Marilyn Monroe [This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 12-13-2000).] |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
LJA...you are right. Only four stanzas for ya? Not enough! Allow me to add more.... As a mountain, he's a molehill He's a real piece of work Disregard the countless millions Who consider him a jerk. Though he may be IQ challenged I would never call him dumb He has a zest for life within him That will always leave one....numb. He's real good at strong lovemaking And he never thinks it queer That, when he's at the height of passion, His wife screams out "Balladeer!!!" Now it's a larger tribute to ya And you deserve each single word How could ya think that I don't love ya? The thought is really quite absurd!!!  |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
err, uhhh, gee, Balladeer - I am overwhelmed by your, uh, adulation - lol. lmao@screams out Balladeer. Thanks, Mike - you're too much (I'll define later) |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
lol at you two. C'mon you guys kiss and make up. errr didn't mean that, I'm not presuming either of you use make up or ...nevermind. shake hands and be friend's...no LJ you don't have to spit on it...cut it out you two get out of my head and back on the paper where you belong. Cmon post and riposte...I love it. Btw chat rooms up the stairs and to your left, mind the step. Keth Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant - Thoreau |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderful Kethry. . . it would seem that we are on the same wavelength today. . . and that LngJhn is the lucky person. . . Excellent my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sven, it's the flux Thank you Keth Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant - Thoreau |
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