Open Poetry #11 |
Rhythm Rain |
VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Rhythm Rain Virginia Salter listen to the rhythm of the rain as it trickles down the drain hear it splatter ‘gainst the window pane drizzle streams of rainbows across the sky then blacken deeper the night as it mirrors effervescent light giving contrast filled with delight in harmony with my heart a rhythm patterned in the dark to my spirit gives a spark and my footsteps marking time as sprinkles collect in rhyme a glaze in the autumn clime © October 10, 2000 |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
I could hear the rain. I just love how the rain makes me feel. Enjoyed the pitter patter of the drops. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Thank you inot, for the read and the lovely comment. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
VAS, this rain rhythm was so vivid now I have to...Nevermind. Great write Be well, laugh long Kethry Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant - Thoreau |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Thanks, Kethry! LOL, that certainly would be vivid. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Liked it!!!!! |
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